Broken Mirror, Losing You |
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 Apr 18 2006, 07:56 PM
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 Koorime  Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 237,135  |
I stare at the broken mirror and I cry
My heart is broken I can see your immobile body It scares me I'm terrified I can't move Blood slowly begins to seep around you I try to scream your name But I can't speak It's like I'm trapped in my body I can't save you Tears run down my face The mirror is slowly misting over I'm losing my last chance to save you I struggle to move but I only move an inch The doors of the mansion whip open with the wind As your spirit rides the wind I cry silently |
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Apr 29 2006, 01:58 PM
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I love it, and I love the way it makes me feel.
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May 5 2006, 11:27 AM
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 I love Havasupai Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 |
Now that I have read several of your works, there seems to be a strong theme of unreconciled loss that is screaming at the top of its lungs. Your ability to peer through the veil of this challenge is brilliant! I'm sure your work resonates with many people as the ability to describe suffering touches many. I hope you will be able to write from the space of peace and acceptance some day!
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May 5 2006, 02:13 PM
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Koorime Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 237,135 |
I have written something along the lines of peace but it alwas seemed to have some sadness laced through it...Hmm...I think I'll write something like that someday but right now my writing's more a mix of angst, dark, hope, and love...
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May 7 2006, 02:44 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 2,614 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,903 |
This is so up beat.. :-)
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