[untitled]november 24,2004, I found this today |
 Feb 25 2006, 06:25 PM
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i was going through my computer when i found this.
A moonlit room
Full of his own little memories Darkness seemed to revere his soul Only A distant whisper Echoed in his heartless persona A distant whisper… That’s all it will ever be A faded memory for the unforeseen To see That’s all she is now Someone from the past All because he left her For someone he knew would never last everyone did... A dying echo… Of what could and should have been Her eternal lover His false love is a burden of your sin You mistook her love for yours And thought you could love him as well But to love someone who never loved you ...That was my ticket to hell. He broke you when he said yes And you never noticed it until the end Was he selfish to try and hold you Even when his heart began to bend? He acted his way in your heart to be everything you wanted him to be and everything you didn't. Herizon, the monster. |
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herizon xP [untitled]november 24,2004 Feb 25 2006, 06:25 PM
skp86 that was beautiful <3 Feb 25 2006, 06:26 PM xxxSiERRAxxx Did you write this...?? It was lovely!
---... Feb 26 2006, 12:03 AM ranniel Sounds so exquisite! Mar 1 2006, 08:07 PM herizon xP i like two lines out of this whole poem Mar 3 2006, 09:26 PM
RiddleMeWonders QUOTE(herizon xP @ Mar 3 2006, 10:26 PM) ... Mar 3 2006, 10:32 PM herizon xP QUOTE(RiddleMeWonders @ Mar 3 2006, 9:32 ... Mar 3 2006, 10:36 PM Cloud_X I don't want to pry or anything...but what are... Mar 8 2006, 02:34 AM herizon xP which two did you like, sir? Mar 8 2006, 03:17 AM tic tac. Beautiful, Hez. I never knew you were such a good ... Mar 8 2006, 10:39 PM herizon xP pff, hahaa, me?
that's not very good criticism... Mar 9 2006, 01:57 AM Tribal J_Rome Hez Ping, I admire your writing skills! Skilla... May 1 2006, 08:07 PM  |
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