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 Apr 27 2006, 01:09 PM
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 yay for hugs :)  Group: Member Posts: 132 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 126,872  |
 so i was bored in my graphic design class and so i mad this constructive critisism pleaseeee  -rosy |
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| *StanleyThePanda* |
Apr 27 2006, 01:11 PM
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If the big picture wasnt so blurry it be perfect. Maybe sharpen is a little?
Other than that its pretty  More color too, maybe some textures? |
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Apr 27 2006, 03:05 PM
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^just was i was going to say =x
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Apr 27 2006, 06:32 PM
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yay for hugs :) Group: Member Posts: 132 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 126,872 |
actually i kinda wanted the front picture to be blurry cus it's like "id rather be in a dream then really here" sorta thing
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| *This Confession* |
Apr 27 2006, 07:34 PM
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hmm makes sense
i was going to say the same as the others i really like the bg part better though |
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Apr 27 2006, 09:04 PM
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 I intend to live forever-so far, so good. Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
to give it the dream effect, you're better off flattening the whole image and the bluring it then setting the image to overlay.. or screen or somthing. that way it looks more dreamy than blurred. i love the blend i think its cute, especially those bg images =]
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Apr 27 2006, 09:05 PM
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nice theme, the images are really nice.nice quality too. great job
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Apr 27 2006, 11:26 PM
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 in a matter of time Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,151 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 191,357 |
The positioning of the images is very well done - quite original. I haven't commented on a blend/collage in Graphics Showcase in months because they've all looked the same - blah, boring, unoriginal. Yours is different, and I like that.
I agree with Maryland about the dream effect, though. And, I'm not too fond of the text - the font and type of stroke doesn't fit it too well. |
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Apr 27 2006, 11:51 PM
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yay for hugs :) Group: Member Posts: 132 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 126,872 |
yea i completely agree with you gigiopolis. i didnt like the font i used either but our school's computers have these stupid blockers so i cant dl any of the fonts i want :( so i had to make the best of what i had :(
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Apr 28 2006, 12:02 AM
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 dont steal my eggroll Group: Member Posts: 528 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,442 |
QUOTE(>>radiant @ Apr 27 2006, 4:32 PM)  actually i kinda wanted the front picture to be blurry cus it's like "id rather be in a dream then really here" sorta thing I see the style you were going for. It looks good but what I was thinking is maybe a light gradiant over the pic with beige or tan. It looks very pretty just the way it is though
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| *ranniel* |
Apr 28 2006, 06:21 PM
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Yeah looks really good, but I don't like the font too. Nice job though.
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Apr 28 2006, 09:56 PM
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 the name is ada. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,688 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,608 |
^^I agree.The font should be a different color in my opinion.
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Apr 28 2006, 10:16 PM
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 Peggy. Group: Member Posts: 2,508 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 214,025 |
It would have been flawless if the big picture isn't blurry!
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Apr 29 2006, 12:42 AM
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 ladybugs are hot <3 Group: Member Posts: 1,169 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,802 |
the shoulder looks cut out =/
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