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i'm no poet
*tahco_monster*
post Apr 20 2006, 08:40 PM
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the sun shines,
the girl smiles,
how long can we keep living
this pretend lifestyle?

the party's over
the candles are out
and the boy is gone
without a doubt.

the bleeding heart
ruptures again
we always knew
they'd be just friends.

her heart is glass
it breaks you see,
but all you hear is
me, me, me.

the photograph left on the wall
tells the story of it all.
where there once was a smile,
is now a frown
and now i begin to drown.

a river of tears
begins to flow
as a shaky hand
begins to let go.

an empty house is not a home,
you can't go on living alone.
her tempting body, her luscious lips
are both begging for your kiss.

all your fears and all your lies,
now emerge from the tears
falling from her eyes.

perfection, perfection
it never lasts,
and you and i
ended too fast.

fingertips to fingertips,
i always knew
our love ceased to exist.
a broken girl doesn't repair too well,
there's too much left to say,
and too little to tell.

No one could see
the flares we fired,
our cry for help
constantly backfired.

try to get out,
escape the hurt;
the only protection, the only comfort.
but she'll come back,
she always does
you were her one and only;
the only love.


uhh, i tried to put it into stanzas ermm.gif
c&c are appreciated
 

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tahco_monster   i'm no poet   Apr 20 2006, 08:40 PM
Angelina Taylor   I loved it.. and I rarely like something that much...   Apr 20 2006, 09:21 PM
tic tac.   Moni, that was not psychotic of you! OMG! ...   Apr 21 2006, 04:29 PM
skp86   That, was really good moni, it would probably make...   Apr 21 2006, 07:48 PM
tahco_monster   thanks guys! and AHH, i will never forget yo...   Apr 22 2006, 11:18 PM
GiggleBear   love it. ryhmes very well   Apr 29 2006, 10:50 AM


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