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| *NatiMarie* |
 May 17 2004, 06:03 PM
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Post up some of your haikus so that everyone can see them. They can be about whatever you want (keep them clean please, PG-13).
 Just in case you don't know what a Haiku is, it's common format consist of a poem that has 5 syllables in first line, 7 syllables the second, and 5 syllables the third. Here's an example one that I wrote a couple of months ago (it's longer, well it's not a Haiku, just a combination of three.): Breaking Loose by NatiMarie Trembling silence Fear of breaking the tether My inwardness lives Botheration kills Cringing while venerating Sluing in my pit Binging fearfulness Terminating hope, now gone Accruing demise |
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| *CEP* |
May 17 2004, 06:56 PM
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^ Yeah, I wrote a poem like that expecting it was a haiku. Turns out it wasn't. So yeah...
Here's one off the top of Jose's head: Infidelity Is the main reason that she Comes home very late. I dunno. lol. - Chinkieeyedpnoi |
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| *Kathleen* |
May 17 2004, 07:14 PM
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I like, Jose. Hmm...I should make one up right now.
We'll die together Do not worry, I'm not scared Because you love me Haha sad, I know...here's another one I just thought up right now: One day I shall rule I'll punish all the meanies They'll all burn and die (That one was for Kim) |
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May 17 2004, 10:26 PM
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First one:
Why can't you see The painful tears in my eyes As you walked away Second one: We live together On this silly little world That some called the earth lol the first reflected my feelings not so long ago, and the second was just pure randomness, or as I like to call it, randomosity ^___^ |
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May 27 2004, 09:15 PM
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 <3<3<3<3 Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,177 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,779 |
i have one! haha it was stupid it was when i was mad at my mother and was in creative thinking mode
 My room was messy my mom told me to clean it, and now im grounded. and thats the truth! 
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May 28 2004, 04:07 AM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
mine is realllie weird and it might not make any sense cus i dont got the mood to think lols haha
you are so stupid because i really hate you and you are dummy hahahaha... sorry for the dumb haiku haha hmm another one you are cute and i... i like you like you like me cus i reallie do . . . i know thats soo weird hahaha |
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May 29 2004, 02:28 AM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
fourty-five houses
none of them have seen a day take that, GW nerd day is a sham descrimination is bad i love nerds so much! children laugh at jokes but not at the ones i tell stupid kids should die party at nikki's don't forget t bring the booze Xs on my hands on the carpet in andrews room their is dried up puke from two weeks past mathiew is a jerk and he thinks he is so cool he peed on the couch my back is itchy i will scratch it with a knife hey my blood is red i just made all those up. am i good or what? |
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May 29 2004, 06:04 AM
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i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
haha that ones funny, ryfitaDF
mathiew is a jerk and he thinks he is so cool he peed on the couch newais... I love you lots, so.... please don't tell me that you changed cus i will be sad |
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May 29 2004, 12:05 PM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
Here's this one:
Mowed the lawn today It was my first time to sweat In a long time, sad OOOOOOOOOOOOH! You Point Your Finger I'd like to bite it off now Why Are You So Rude? Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. Whasa thisa? I need a kleenex Runny nose and tears From you after years |
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May 29 2004, 07:18 PM
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 Look its... Group: Official Member Posts: 5,817 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,767 |
those are cool. i some how findit hard to make my own. and i had to make some for me english class oh well points will be taken of
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