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 Apr 15 2006, 05:01 PM
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James: good idea......it was terrible, dear mother was coming down the stairs and all the sudden she tripped, she came rolling down and got severly injured, daddy was mad because he had left his books on the stairs, which caused her to trip, and drove off, guilty and afraid he would accuse her, but of course mother knew it was not on purpose.
Jane: the father is an alchoholic, that's why he is crazy cast:we need to decide who is being abused in the first scene |
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Apr 15 2006, 05:07 PM
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^ Ah yes...should we include a reason why he started to drink?
I think we should have...one of the twins being abuse. This should make it interesting since both of them feel the pain but only one of them is being abused while the other is watching. Since this is already in progress, do you think the Createblog Family should have a more organized topic in the writing forum, with the roles of each cBer and the storyline. It would be a good place to discuss the episodes. |
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Apr 15 2006, 05:07 PM
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jane: his work was hard, so he just would try to drink his problems away. ok, you and robb have to work that out. that's a good idea, except it would have to be so only cast and *crew* can view it than after wards we make a new thread which would be like: cB family episode: 1 and make it open to the public
edit// perhaps this should have a different name this isn't in anyway related to cB unless they write about it on createblog or something 
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Apr 15 2006, 05:12 PM
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^ This is when I wish I had moderator powers to go "backstage". I guess we'd all have to discuss it over AIM or in a chatroom before making it into an official thread. I still think we need a catchier title.
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Apr 15 2006, 05:13 PM
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i just said that in my edit but you beat me to it, we should pm one of the mods about, and since paul thought of it maybe he should om one
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Apr 15 2006, 05:21 PM
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I also think that Paul should be the one to make the first thread. But we just need to have everything organized.
Here's the characters: QUOTE Steffie (Skp86): Sally - 6 Year Old Daughter. Jane (My Cinderella.): Hellena - 16 Year old, suicidal, parent-hating daughter. Robbie (robb0): (Name not yet decided) - Twin of Hellena similar personality. Krista (marzipan): Crazy Grandmother. Paul (Paul M. is Baaack): Paul - Annoying 12 year old brother (POSSIBLY Eddie as a father) Tina (tic tac): (Background character) Slutty teenager, around 16, befriends Hellena and (Undecided) and tries to turn her into evil 16 year old demons. (tahco_monster): Francesco - Family dog Yen (Blow Don't Suck): Angry mother James (I Shot JFK): (Background Character) Dillon - Corruptive boyfriend of Hellena, (Undecided twin) is jealous of this, and often tried to persuade Dillon to "come to her side". He is hated by the father and hates the father. Storyline? QUOTE 4 children and their disturbed parents are living under one chaotic household. Hellena knows more than she should. (Undecided Twin Name) wishes she was never born. Sally is trapped between pressure from her sibling and her parents, and Paul tries his best to stay out of the wrath of his parents, but into the annoyance of his siblings. This horror-comedy is filled with laughs and suspense as the family meets and befriends new people. Along with Krista, the family's favorite and coocoo grandmother Mae who puts the fun in funny.
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Apr 15 2006, 05:26 PM
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NOTE: dillon also tries his best to help the family through their troubles.
but before we do paul should pm a mod but most likely an admin since they have that ability i beleive so it can be private. |
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Apr 15 2006, 05:29 PM
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What do you think of the storyline? ^ It's up there.
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Apr 15 2006, 05:37 PM
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^remember my name is sally, and krista's name is grandma mae
i think it's a good storyline, you made it a bit happier which is good =) but we still need it either a)have a new name or b)make it have something to do with cB |
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Apr 15 2006, 05:40 PM
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The Createblog parody?
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Apr 15 2006, 05:42 PM
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parody? huh?
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Apr 15 2006, 05:44 PM
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I'm not sure, it was the first thing that came to mind. Parody is usually something like scary movie 1,2,3,4. So scratch that...a walk in my shoes?
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Apr 15 2006, 05:44 PM
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isn't that already a show?
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Apr 15 2006, 05:47 PM
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 ...Chaotic Createblog. |
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Apr 15 2006, 05:51 PM
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that sounds good =)
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Apr 15 2006, 05:58 PM
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Now then...we need to discuss this with the crew.
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Apr 15 2006, 06:38 PM
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do we really need a crew?
edit// last chance to apply;;you can only be a boy since we have too many girls at this point, please tell us what you want your name to be and your character (ex:brother, neighbor, cousin, boyfriend,etc) or you can apply for crew......like an idea person;;someone who gives us ideas for episodes and whatever |
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Apr 15 2006, 07:45 PM
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nvm i'll do it. i can't make up my mind! QUOTE(skp86 @ Apr 15 2006, 4:21 PM)  you mean him abusing them? who should be abused at the beginning? sure ok so it'd be something like this daddy just got back from the bar again, i could tell he had a tough day at work, so i hid. oh i was so scared. why didn't he love me? why does he hate me so much?? oh no i hear he calling my name dad: get over here! one of the daughters: oh daddy please dad: i said get your ass over here! one of the daughters: (tries to run away) dad: grabs her and starts beating her mom: (walks in) (tries to calm dad down) dad: get off me! (punches mother) one of the daughters: mommmmyyyyy  DAD: SHUT UP. one of the daughters: (runs away to dillon's house hoping he can help ) by the time she got back her mom was lying on the floor with blood all over and her dad's car was gone omg, that's way too brutal for me. i'd rather not do that.
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Apr 15 2006, 07:50 PM
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^you're the grandma you'll live
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Apr 15 2006, 08:44 PM
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You're supposed to be the comic relief!
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Apr 15 2006, 08:50 PM
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yea, make jokes, like your mother is such a coward that she says moo get it cow-ard? [/cheesy joke]
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Apr 16 2006, 05:51 AM
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why IS this still in feedback?
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Apr 16 2006, 07:13 AM
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^because a mod hasn't moved it to writing?
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Apr 16 2006, 07:50 AM
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Hmmm, all is looking good so far, I'll just take everything so far, put it on Microsoft Word, then post it when it's finalized.
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Apr 16 2006, 08:05 AM
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okay =)
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