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Momma used to tell me
*My Cinderella.*
post Mar 29 2006, 09:37 PM
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Momma used to tell me that love wasn't real
and that you couldn't always tell by the way that you feel
Momma used to tell me that the tales were fake
and in order to have a happy ending it was up to you to make
Momma used to tell me that love was a dream
and when you finally get a hold of it, it isn't what it seems
As time slowly passed, my momma was right
There was no prince charming, no love at first sight
Momma used to sing about how her and dad used to be
Used to be together, in love, even had a family
But now all that love is gone, it can never come back
cause I knew that it was over when daddy stood at the door with his sack
There were tears in our eyes, and thats when I knew
Momma was right when she said that it hurts to lose a boo.
I never wanna feel the pain that I once felt.
But still I long for that feeling, for that boy who would make my heart melt.
But alas, momma is right and that's all I'll ever know
why? because I never again want to see my daddy go.
And the memory still replays in my mind
every second, every minute, every single time...

Basically, just need some C&C. Wrote this out of boredom.
 

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My Cinderella.   Momma used to tell me   Mar 29 2006, 09:37 PM
Ice Cream 4 U   I don't think there really can be any critisis...   Mar 29 2006, 09:49 PM
My Cinderella.   ^ Thanks Sierra   Mar 29 2006, 09:53 PM
skp86   It sounds like a rap to me But it's good =)   Mar 29 2006, 09:55 PM
ranniel   QUOTE(skp86 @ Mar 29 2006, 9:55 PM) It so...   Mar 31 2006, 08:18 PM
My Cinderella.   ^ LOL That's what I thought when I read it ove...   Mar 29 2006, 09:56 PM
Blow_Don't_SUCK   QUOTE(My Cinderella. @ Mar 29 2006, 9:56 ...   Mar 31 2006, 08:25 PM
tic tac.   Lol Steffie, now that I think about it, it kidna d...   Mar 29 2006, 10:03 PM
My Cinderella.   Oh sure, just cause of the mommas?   Mar 29 2006, 10:08 PM
Caitlinnn   This a great poem or er rap? Lol. I usually dont l...   Mar 30 2006, 01:15 PM
My Cinderella.   ^ thank you so much   Mar 31 2006, 11:30 AM
My Cinderella.   ^ Thank you so much Yen.   Apr 1 2006, 12:24 PM
Blow_Don't_SUCK   ^You're welcome.   Apr 1 2006, 12:27 PM


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