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As I lay dying.., -cuts-
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post Mar 27 2006, 10:06 PM
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I'm just another LIFELESS CORPSE
SUICIDE is my only option
Life is PAINFUL
DEATH is painless
CUTTING is my doctor
-swishes hair-
I CRINGE AND SCREAM AS I'M BURIED INTO THE PAIN AND ANGUISH
RIPPING OPEN MY HEART THE BLOOD SPILLS ON THE FLOOR
POURING AND POURING I LAY THERE ON THE DESK TRYING TO MURMUR MY LAST FEW WORDS
OF THE PAIN YOU CAUSED, OF ALL THE HELL YOU PUT ME THROUGH
cry.gif cry.gif cry.gif cry.gif cry.gif

I've capitalized words that make this "poem" sound emo. -eCuts-
 
juliar
post Mar 27 2006, 10:07 PM
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3,565, you n00bs ain't got nothin' on me.
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omg thats really good
5 stars!
 
ANG33ZY
post Mar 27 2006, 10:08 PM
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word. it's real good cause i wrote the last 4 lines
 
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post Mar 27 2006, 10:08 PM
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^Well are you emo like me?

NO!
 
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post Mar 27 2006, 10:08 PM
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post Mar 27 2006, 10:10 PM
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shut up christine, i'm more emo than you are. -eCuts rapidly-

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this is hilarious.
 
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post Mar 27 2006, 10:14 PM
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OMG, this is hilarious.
*eCuts a heart on my wrist*
Isn't it beautiful?

You deserve a flower for being so emo. :D
 
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post Mar 27 2006, 10:26 PM
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Ew, EMO.
Do people even know what it is? NO!
Just call it the new fad. >:[
Gaah, no offense to anyone.
 
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post Mar 27 2006, 10:47 PM
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lol..my writings also dark and "emo" but i am NOT emo hmph >:[ and heres to prove that biggrin.gifbiggrin.gifbiggrin.gif
 
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post Mar 28 2006, 03:30 AM
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As I Lay Dying is the title of a William Faulkner book. That's not an emo title.
 
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post Mar 28 2006, 04:13 PM
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^Christine is ignorant.


Christine is this about your crush liking a hoe?
 
xstab.my.heartx
post Mar 29 2006, 08:13 PM
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holy hell, that's emo :P


good job

QUOTE(illumineering @ Mar 28 2006, 3:30 AM) *
As I Lay Dying is the title of a William Faulkner book. That's not an emo title.


It's also an emo-screamo band. biggrin.gif
 
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post Apr 1 2006, 12:36 PM
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oooh yeah.
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Christine, you're the next NY Times bestseller. "Confessions of an Emo."
 
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post Apr 1 2006, 07:05 PM
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QUOTE(xstab.my.heartx @ Mar 29 2006, 7:13 PM) *
holy hell, that's emo :P
good job
It's also an emo-screamo band. biggrin.gif


As I Lay Dying isn't emo-screamo... it's a Christian band labeled as 'hardcore'. But I hate that word too much, so I'm just going to say hard rock. I just don't believe it's emo.

And that was a very emo poem. -cries and eCuts-
 

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