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you're just a man
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post Mar 22 2006, 07:43 PM
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“you’re just a man,”

she’d say, scowling,
prowling the inner depths of my
mind
searching for any explication

“you’re just a man,”

predisposed to apathy,
happily ignorant and indifferent to
emotion
unmindful and sensually stolid

“you’re just a man,”

with indignant cries,
lies in the forefront of my
consciousness
beleaguering my sanity

“you’re just a man,”

would crop up in fights,
nights laced with acrimonious
heartache
the dissonance still rattles my skull

“you’re just a man,”

without any feeling,
stealing away your tears and
laughing
giddy with contemptible naivety

“you’re just a man,”

perhaps it’s true,
imbued deeper than hammurabi’s
code
unchangeably written

“you’re just a man!”

stupid man…
 

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CrackedRearView   you're just a man   Mar 22 2006, 07:43 PM
Phoenixx   I love the structure of this poem and the words yo...   Mar 22 2006, 09:35 PM


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