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BeAuTiFuL dIsAStEr, the truth
hurtabit
post Mar 15 2006, 08:16 PM
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okay so i no alot of you dont me but heres a great way to find out! ill write this poem to explain a few things see if y'all can relate.

grew up on a lonely farm
less family to be found
lots of people came and went
none want to stay around
forgotten child
hidden in the corner
scars and tears are all she knows
lost loves broken heart frogetful mind
pretty face with abroken mirror
longing for a expression
so she writes and writes
pen as another limb
cigarettes and friends
pictures and books
a nerd to all
smart to few
forgotten to most
family doesnt seem to care she left
fell in love early with the man of her dreams
he was taken by a car
which he ran into atree
she lives a awkward life
few people will even care
when she dies no one will even know she was there
know she loves a man
who loves her back
her hearts still in peices
she wont get back
some think shes crazy
others think she brillant
i think im different
but the truth is
writing
poerty
photography
painting
singing
playing
strumming
drumming
laughing
caring
sleeping
eating
that is me
who are you?
 
*chaneun*
post Mar 15 2006, 08:39 PM
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Why did you attach that picture to your post? o_o
You posted the same thing twice.

sTiCkY CaPs ArE AnNoYiNg!11!11!
 
hurtabit
post Mar 15 2006, 08:42 PM
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WELL BECAUSE I DID I WANTED TO AND IF U CANT SAY ANYTHING NICE ABOUT IT THEN DONT SAY ANYTHING! GOD IS THAT SO HARD TO UNDERSTAND THATS WHY I QUIT THE LAST FORUM SITE I WAS ON! PEOPLE NEED TO LEARN KINDNESS
 
hurtabit
post Mar 15 2006, 08:57 PM
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are you happy now no freaking picture!!!
 
AngelinaTaylor
post Mar 15 2006, 09:06 PM
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QUOTE(scratchthisdown @ Mar 15 2006, 8:42 PM) *
AND IF U CANT SAY ANYTHING NICE ABOUT IT THEN DONT SAY ANYTHING!


Whaaaaaaaat? Since when do we have to be nice and not honest? F that. I like honesty ;)

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hurtabit
post Mar 15 2006, 09:13 PM
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i like honesty but i like it a nice way being mean about this is what i call insercurity@! get a clue im not anyones mother but c'mon! thats a load of crap u dont have to be mean to be honest!
 
hurtabit
post Mar 15 2006, 09:45 PM
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thats what i thought nothing to say now
 
AngelinaTaylor
post Mar 15 2006, 09:48 PM
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Oh and you HAVE to be nice to be honest? I don't think so, dear. Besides, since when do you take people's "online words" so much to heart? What do you care? I'm just a stranger that you don't even know.. :)

Cheers,
Taylor``
 
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post Mar 15 2006, 09:55 PM
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That's a cute poem, but I think we found out more about you than your poem reveals based on your posts and replies.
 
*chaneun*
post Mar 15 2006, 10:10 PM
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^Yeah.

haha, I recieved a PM from her.

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wow its my first day and people like u already have rude shit to say! i dont know you and at this point dontreally want to! what i do is write! i write about everything u dont like it dont read it! thats all i have to say about this subject! so please next time you comment on anything of mine please dont be rude i dont even know you


Excuse me, but what exactly did I say that was so rude?
 
*lil_chubby_cheeks2*
post Mar 15 2006, 10:13 PM
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UHM
yeah, why IS it so rude?
we're giving you our honest opinion so you can get better.
and don't double post _dry.gif

the poem is plain. mellow.gif
not really exciting or anything that makes me want to read on about it.
 
iDecay
post Mar 15 2006, 10:17 PM
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Rude? Well it's annoying When Y0u Typ3 LIIKe ThiS, ok? I agree with what Yen said. It's a good poem, but gosh. You're like.. ACH. mellow.gif
 
AngelinaTaylor
post Mar 15 2006, 10:17 PM
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QUOTE(lil_chubby_cheeks2 @ Mar 15 2006, 10:13 PM) *
UHM
yeah, why IS it so rude?
we're giving you our honest opinion so you can get better.
and don't double post _dry.gif

the poem is plain. mellow.gif
not really exciting or anything that makes me want to read on about it.


Uhoh. Get ready for some bashing because you were SOOOOOOO mean! Shame on you! :P (just kidding)

Cheers,
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post Mar 15 2006, 10:18 PM
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QUOTE(chaneun @ Mar 15 2006, 8:39 PM) *
Why did you attach that picture to your post? o_o
You posted the same thing twice.

sTiCkY CaPs ArE AnNoYiNg!11!11!


no offense but that is so true, please do not double post (READ THE COMMUNITY GUIDELINES.) . And if you have something offensive to say, take it up with that person by PMing them not using cuss words, but politely. If you don't learn now, you'll learn once you come across a mod. Thanks. hammer.gif
 
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post Mar 15 2006, 10:26 PM
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QUOTE(Angelina Taylor @ Mar 15 2006, 10:17 PM) *
Uhoh. Get ready for some bashing because you were SOOOOOOO mean! Shame on you! :P (just kidding)

Cheers,
Taylor``

who are you?

Wait, how do they double post? whenever I do that it edits my previous post.
 
IceCream4U
post Mar 15 2006, 10:37 PM
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QUOTE(chaneun @ Mar 15 2006, 7:26 PM) *
who are you?

Wait, how do they double post? whenever I do that it edits my previous post.


What he did was post the same poem twice
He posted one with an attachment
Then posted one without
And then he fixed the one with an attachment, so it didn't have any

So now we have two, exactly the same topics.

Danielle
 
AngelinaTaylor
post Mar 15 2006, 10:38 PM
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QUOTE(chaneun @ Mar 15 2006, 10:26 PM) *
who are you?

Wait, how do they double post? whenever I do that it edits my previous post.


Uh.. why do you ask?

And I don't know how they double post..

Cheers,
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post Mar 15 2006, 10:39 PM
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QUOTE(Ice Cream 4 U @ Mar 15 2006, 10:37 PM) *
What he did was post the same poem twice
He posted one with an attachment
Then posted one without
And then he fixed the one with an attachment, so it didn't have any

So now we have two, exactly the same topics.

Danielle

I mean double POSTING. not double topics. READ.
 
IceCream4U
post Mar 15 2006, 10:46 PM
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QUOTE
I mean double POSTING. not double topics. READ


Sorry...I was thinking that maybe you were thinking of double topics.....

And nobody double posted :\ (this isn't directed at chaneun...I think its Ranniel who called it double posted..)
Only double topics (I guess I was actually thinking that Ranniel was thinking of double topics, not posting)

Danielle
 
hurtabit
post Mar 15 2006, 10:49 PM
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um im not a he!!! i am a grl

and the double posting was not my fault my puter is messed up and freezes so i hitthe button twice nad i dont no how to delet it
 
aubbob
post Mar 15 2006, 10:50 PM
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WOW. calm down.. it's ok.. just don`t do it again.
it`s her first day.. i think?
 
xxxSiERRAxxx
post Mar 15 2006, 10:50 PM
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I really liked that poem.

I don't see why such a big deal is being made out of this - its just the title.

A little boring though :\

Mr.Thesaurus is your friend.
 
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post Mar 15 2006, 10:51 PM
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QUOTE(chaneun @ Mar 15 2006, 7:26 PM) *
who are you?

Wait, how do they double post? whenever I do that it edits my previous post.


you post
and then you wait for like a period of time to post again
 
hurtabit
post Mar 15 2006, 11:02 PM
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yes its my first day and yea im getting used to things
 
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post Mar 15 2006, 11:27 PM
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I bet you're going to turn into those cB members who just come here to post once, then quit forever.
 

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