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 Feb 27 2006, 12:46 PM
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 yay for hugs :)  Group: Member Posts: 132 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 126,872  |
so i finished my project in my computer graphics class and i decided to try my hand at trying to make a collage. it's my first time trying to make a collage so please constructive critism
  <3 rosy |
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Feb 27 2006, 01:16 PM
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 Julia Tested, Mother Approved Group: Member Posts: 61 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 188,066 |
I like it, but I'm not fond of the random background colors. It just doesn't match in any way except for the people. But I reallyreallyreally like the torn boarder. It looks really nice. Also, I like how they're positioned but, just not the placing in the picture. Because it looks very cluttered at the bottom and sides. Maybe try spacing everything out evenly? The font is not to my liking, neither is its color. But, other than that, it's very nice. =) Great job!
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Feb 27 2006, 04:04 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,055 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 174,796 |
I can't see anything =\
edit// I see it now it looks great  I just don't like the apttern.Great job  
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Feb 27 2006, 04:25 PM
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RJL<3 Group: Member Posts: 1,194 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 71,019 |
i like it!
that pic of them at the bottom right is really cool. And i like the font. i think the outlining of the pictures should be the same color though. sometimes that can be hard to do..atleast its not blendy, like my collages. great job
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Feb 27 2006, 04:57 PM
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 Yea Yea. Group: Member Posts: 837 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 79,366 |
I really like it but it might look even better if all the outlines were the same colour. Great job!
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Feb 27 2006, 06:27 PM
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i agree, make the stroke be all one color.nice images and i like the border.cool background too.great job
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Feb 27 2006, 07:53 PM
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i like it..cept the random green shirt on the left kinda..doesnt go well w/ th rest...maybe find a pic where the shirt would match better w/ the bg colors/other pic colors
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| *ranniel* |
Feb 27 2006, 08:30 PM
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its well done. good job, i like it! good blend, but you can always improve it then it'll be the bomb!
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Feb 27 2006, 11:30 PM
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i like it! great job!
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Feb 27 2006, 11:33 PM
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I like this, all the pictures and stuff look so awesome. The background is very nice. It looks very original.
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Feb 28 2006, 01:36 PM
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 Watch This Group: Member Posts: 886 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,408 |
im goin with what steffie said
the way they are placed just looks weird but other wise its quite clean good job |
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| *islandgirl4eva* |
Feb 28 2006, 04:46 PM
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I love how random it is. And the background pattern seems to match them, in every shape and form. Great job!
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Mar 10 2006, 12:51 AM
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 the name is ada. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,688 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,608 |
The pattern and images are nice.
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| *suddenly she* |
Mar 10 2006, 01:49 PM
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the pictures kind of clash. take for example the one on the left with whatsherface going OMG and the one on the right corner in sepia. i like how you put the torn border there, but it's a ... contradictory piece. and the photo of whatsherface again that tilts at a 45degree angle doesn't really fit...
but still, good job. i couldn't do something like that myself. |
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| *iNyCxShoRT* |
Mar 10 2006, 08:42 PM
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I happen to love this. It looks brilliant. I like how you did the torn border. I'm looking forward to your other creations.
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Mar 10 2006, 08:55 PM
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 Pocketful of Sunshine Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,690 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 289,004 |
The background color doesen't seem to match, but besides that, I don't see anything wrong. It's really nice! Goob job!
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Mar 10 2006, 09:06 PM
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Tu es laid. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,913 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 106,675 |
i like it.. even the random colors cause collages are suppose to be kind of random and unique.
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Mar 10 2006, 09:58 PM
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 Milo Kamalani Group: Human Posts: 954 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 274,798 |
I like how you outlined them, gives it 'flare'.
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Mar 11 2006, 01:03 PM
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 What a hypocrite. Group: Member Posts: 2,754 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 128,150 |
Mm, I'd have to say - great collage. I love how you placed the images in a sense that they're all not too crowded and bunched up together, you know?
As for picking the subject(s) for your collage, Mary-Kate&Ashley go well with what you created.
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