Sweet Serenity |
Sweet Serenity |
May 15 2004, 01:20 PM
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heyy guys..i wrote this yesterday while reminiscing memories with my boyyfriend..juss wonderin what you guys think....
I set one foot outside the car door and I automatically smell the fresh scent of sea salt, I see a flock of seagulls flying in a “V” shape, and I hear the waves crashing like thunder upon the shore. As I walk down the long “L” shaped stairs, I cannot help but be overjoyed. I look to the left and right of me and see two or three others sitting in the sand or walking along the shoreline. As I walk down the crooked shoreline, I stare at the sand full of different colored sea shells. I then remember walking down the same shoreline, hand in hand with my boyfriend. I simply smile to myself. As I lose myself in my memory, I feel the ice cold water rushing over my toes and under the arches of my feet, which zaps me back into present time. The tide is quickly rising. I can see the bundles of seaweed, in no particular arrangement, setting upon the shore. I must hurry before I miss it! I stare into the distance at my destination point. “About an eight minute walk, not too much longer,” I think to myself. I walk quickly and notice the white and red lifeguard station to my left. This is where my boyfriend and I had our first kiss. Once again, I smile and think to myself. Walking at a rapid pace now, almost running, I reach the large, brown and olive green cliff. I set my towel down on an eroded patch of grass. I finally gaze up at the sky and see it. A massive orange circle slowly falls into the navy blue water. The sky burns with passion; red, yellow, orange, purple, blue. I am just in time. The sun has begun to set. I sit quietly on my towel, writing a letter to my boyfriend, thinking about my day. I write until my hand begins to cramp. I read my letter to myself and smile. I then fold it in thirds and weigh it down with the heel of my tan sandal. I lie upon the towel set perfectly upon the small patch of grass, and close my eyes. Not too long after, I open my eyes once again and take a deep breath. I smell the scent of sea salt in the night air, the seagulls are no longer flying, and the waves now sound like the soft whisper of the wind. The passion filled sky slowly dies, turning to a jet black. I close my eyes once again, begin to dream, and smile. |
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TiNaBaBY074 Sweet Serenity May 15 2004, 01:20 PM
dukesoccer07 Wow, thats really good... good job May 15 2004, 01:22 PM
LiNHy POO how cute! May 15 2004, 02:18 PM
sweetlyz wow .. that`s beautiful. very romantic and po... May 15 2004, 04:30 PM
x_angawhomps Wow.. yes.. very romantic xD May 15 2004, 05:34 PM
liquidbluac1d awesome job!! May 15 2004, 05:55 PM![]() ![]() |