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 Feb 25 2006, 04:08 AM
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 I just "got it like that".  Group: Member Posts: 247 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,238  |
I don't know. This definately isn't one of my better works. I think I'm getting writer's block.
 --------Colors-------- a heart beating faster as it goes a wisper a touch a kiss with eyes closed a dream awake as the room turns from white oh, things will never be the same... as the colors change. |
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Feb 25 2006, 11:39 AM
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it sounds good. i see nothing wrong with it, its very abstract.
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Feb 25 2006, 03:19 PM
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 mac & zee. Group: Member Posts: 243 Joined: Feb 2006 Member No: 376,265 |
Ooh, I like it. From the beginning to "a kiss with eyes closed" is my favorite part. :3
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Feb 26 2006, 12:12 AM
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 "lal! laugh a little!" Group: Member Posts: 192 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 364,863 |
Something about it is very...strong I don't know what to say about it...let me think of the words...........................................................................
............................................... Ah, yes. It makes me imagine I'm standing in a hallway, just looking at a painting as it changes colors...I love it - its short and sweet! --->Sierra |
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