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 Feb 2 2006, 08:07 PM
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 i am mean. fear me.  Group: Member Posts: 178 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 300,587  |
this is my first vector. it's not great but i thought i would post it anyway.
   constructive critisism, please. i've dcided not to finish it.  maybe you guys can point somethings out that i can do better next time
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Feb 2 2006, 08:22 PM
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 ladybugs are hot <3 Group: Member Posts: 1,169 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,802 |
its too choppy >< try and make it smoother
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Feb 2 2006, 08:24 PM
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 You'll find me in your dreams. Group: Official Member Posts: 8,536 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 114,010 |
Smoother would be nicer. &try not to blur, as on the second one.
Very nice for starteing out tho. Is Mischa Barton? 'cause it sorta looks like her.
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Feb 2 2006, 08:24 PM
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 the name is ada. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,688 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,608 |
It`s good for a first!
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Feb 2 2006, 08:26 PM
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 Amberific. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 |
It's Sarah Michelle Gellar. Your shapes are quite choppy but it's looking pretty good so far.
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Feb 2 2006, 11:28 PM
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First of all, the layers are too choppy. Secondly, you should blur your vexel, thats pretty much cheating.
Its good for a first... try making your layers smoother (without blurring) |
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Feb 2 2006, 11:48 PM
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 Peggy. Group: Member Posts: 2,508 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 214,025 |
Don't blur it out of some parts are choppy. Everything needs work but at least it is good that you tried it.
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Feb 3 2006, 02:57 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 7,149 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 213,509 |
i agree with them about it being choppy, other wise its pertty awesome so far, keep up the good work and cant wait to see it when its finished.
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Feb 3 2006, 06:23 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,055 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 174,796 |
Pretty choppy =\
The eyelashes are gross...they're too fat. The eyebrows could use some hair The nose I have to say is very good Same with the teeth. But you should work on the lips too And the skin is ok. |
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Feb 4 2006, 02:40 PM
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 I intend to live forever-so far, so good. Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
yeah instead of blurring juss add more layers ;) its very good for a first tho
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