another colourization, ... Options

[xosteffanator]

Ok another colourization, I tryed working on the skin color but I'm not too sure about it so I need your opinion
Original

Colourization

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Revised version

Comments?

[talcumpowder]

Bits of her hair aren't coloured. And there's a section of her cap that is skin coloured.... The section under it isn't and her neck isn't coloured at all. You really ought to work on technique more than colouring. Her lips are also a tad too vibrant for the colours you've chosen. Her eyes are skin coloured, which is a pet peeve of mine... I think you should spend much more time on your colorizations.

[Comptine]

you missed the hair above the cap. the skin color is too orange and pale. the hair color is pale too. it doesn't look like you colored her neck. you overcolored the skin onto her cap and the whites of her eyes. her lips are too saturated and a bit sloppy at the lines. the only thing i like are the eyes. i think this was a sloppy colourization and with more time, it would have turned out better.

[*reflection*]

there are many grays and you went out of the lines in her hair
as fishcake-y said you should work on technique and spend more time on colorizations so they'll look natural

[PrincessAda]

Her hair looks kinda funny.Her eyes a little bit too.But other than that you did great! Keep up the good work =]

[miszSERENiTY]

Keep trying :)

[turbulent]

i cannot emphasize more how much the choice of picture is almost more important as the colization. the one you chose has too great a contrast. its all dark to bright so when you colorize it your colors barely show. either change the contrast of the pic b4 colorizing, or choose a different pic

the edited version is best, but your colors are intense enough [when i say that i dont mean they arent saturated enough, but they are pale and dont stand out] and it got smaller

[xosteffanator]

^I don't know how it got resized.....

[m.ar.i.a]

i cant really say about the 3rd one cuz its too small really... but the second one......... her eyes are red... which im pretty sure u know already. but if u work on it more, im sure it will come out really really great, so keep on it! :)

[ohnotheydidnt]

you made it worser
make the skin peach-er
the lips looks scary

[Jeng]

[talking about the revised bersion]
skins too light
cant really see/notice anything else..
:| hmm meh...work on it :]
great though.
..maybe lipstick is too dark.

[xxJess47]

I agree with Jeng. In the revised version the skin is too light, and the lips look really weird.