Strong Love, short poem not finished yet? |
 Jan 8 2006, 11:14 AM
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So she sits and listens to a sorrowful song and it reminds herself that everyones gone theres no one to cry to and just one to love so she crys at night and sings to above and she sings God help me I think Im in love but I cant help it hes all I think of theres something wrong but I have to have to stay strong |
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Annie5332 Strong Love Jan 8 2006, 11:14 AM
Bobblehead425 Well, I like it, but it doesn't really stand o... Jan 8 2006, 12:40 PM
agirlnamed_aly I like the consistent rhyme, and even though the c... Jan 9 2006, 02:00 AM  |
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