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 Jan 3 2006, 03:42 PM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987  |
It's a stanza from this poem thing I wrote, but:
http://www.deviantart.com/view/27213217/ Here you will find our love Shimmering under the rainbow-lit sky Better than a pot of gold you and I will never say goodbye. I'd really like feedback and ideas too. |
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Jan 3 2006, 03:56 PM
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 I love you Group: Member Posts: 194 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 116,447 |
I really like that. It's a realy cute idea, and it looks awesome
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Jan 3 2006, 04:08 PM
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Aw thats super cute!!!
 I love itSo glowy and adorable |
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Jan 3 2006, 04:31 PM
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thats awesome,i love it kristina :]
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Jan 3 2006, 05:03 PM
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Aww that's cute<3
As for ideas I don't know what would be good to add. But good job 
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Jan 3 2006, 06:36 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,551 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 102,857 |
Is there a part b since there's a part a? Iunno forgot that I'm weird and tired right now. Anywho I like it a lot,very cute.
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Jan 3 2006, 06:55 PM
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 something more Group: Member Posts: 2,468 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,808 |
 I like it alot. The poem is nice and the whole idea is awsome.
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Jan 3 2006, 06:55 PM
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 when you smile, i melt inside Group: Member Posts: 1,325 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 267,089 |
Fabulous. :']
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Jan 3 2006, 07:42 PM
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 I intend to live forever-so far, so good. Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
very incredibly beautiful. the colors are so saturated and happy =) wooow haha are you gonna add more to the grass?a river! maybe a cute bird in a tree hahaha i dunno, it looks really great the way it is.
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Jan 3 2006, 10:18 PM
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 ^ignore. read> Maria. Group: Member Posts: 710 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 323,799 |
that is cute! and i luv the poem. ideas... idk since ur basing it on the poem, unless u add more to that, i dont think i can say wat u can add to this. but i like it, and for some reason remind me of marshmallows :P
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Jan 4 2006, 06:08 PM
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show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
QUOTE(Kenado @ Jan 3 2006, 6:36 PM) Is there a part b since there's a part a? Iunno forgot that I'm weird and tired right now. Anywho I like it a lot,very cute.  There is going to be 3 more, which will make it to D. I just haven't posted the other 1 have done, and I haven't finished the other 2.  And each art piece is based off of a stanza from a poem I wrote. But thanks everyone! |
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