Twiggy, First colourization ever Options

[Stephire]

Original(Which was later greysacled)

Then mine:

(Thumbed)
Be nice, this was my first. XD

Edit;;
Well I took it all in and I think this one is better, Though I still used the same makeup colors because I personally like those colors :p. ^_^:
Before
&After:

[*wind&fire*]

hey its better than anything than i can do... i really should learn how to colourise... good job but the writing over the teeth look funny...

[Jeng]

hm i think the eye shadow makeup is to bright.but iother than that, its great for your first try

[b0st0ngrl]

Wow, that's so much better than my first colorization.. haha. Great job!

[ecargnmyst]

lol..its better than what i can do too =] but i think the makeup is too bright..especially the eyes

[warriors1035]

i wish i knew how to colorize

[turbulent]

thats wonderful, the only thing that needs a lil work is the colors. try a more tanned skin color, and less saturated makeup. youve got the basics done perfectly tho! great job!

[CUTEBUNNY160]

^ ditto
and btw where did u get your brushes??

[Stephire]

Thanks guys, ^_^
I got the flower from http://www.1greeneye.net/ & the little circles from http://www.rhysin.net/

[Just_Dream]

Ooh I like how the eyes and lips look. :] I also disagree with the colors... Maybe you could have shades that are more closely related on the color spectrum. I noticed that you added in the flower. It doesn't go well with it, only because it seems like the flower is outlined in yellow? It doesn't blend in with the actual picture. Rather, it looks like it was placed on top of the original, whereas it should look like it is part of the original picture. You know what I mean? But I like the overal look. Awesome. :] The eyes.. Wooowww.. :]

[misoshiru]

i think the eyes and the eyeshadow is too saturated, and the colors you used for the brushes clash with the overall picture.

[blackxpearl]

The first one is really good, I would just make the skin a tiny bit darker and feather the eye makeup a bit more.
The second one, the skin is too weird. The lips look a little weird too, I would try using not so saturated colours. You kinda go outside the face a little bit and I would make the hair a different colour. Probably add some blusher too.
But overall, it's really good. Just remember to use more natural colours, and less saturated colours, especially for the skin. Takes me ages to do the skin. Trial and error, is the best way to learn though right?
But yeah, it's REALLY good. Nice pictures too, nothing obstructing the face, making it harder to select. EEk I hate that, you get a nice picture only to find that you have loads of grass to go around or hair. But yeah, good choice in pictures.
Very well done