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 Nov 17 2005, 08:09 PM
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 i lost weight with Mulder!  Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,070 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 79,019  |
i really like this one.
even though theres still sooo much to be done. im trying out a new style. its a screenshot by the way. the full size is waaayy too big.  things left to do, besides the rest of her. - eyelashes, eyeshading, eyebrows - more ear shading - hair shading guess who it is.  edit: on my computer it looks a bit darker. i guess ill just add some contrast later... edit again: i forgot that since psp is set right now to correct my awful monitors settings, and i took a screenshot of it..it got..super light. |
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Nov 17 2005, 09:00 PM
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 My name is really Matt... if you care. Group: Member Posts: 1,442 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 258,234 |
brace yourself, what im about to tell you, u might already know!
ok -hair needs work (duh) -i dont like the lips at all (they seem REALLY thick) -theres like a shade of tan/peach in the shading between teeth (try gray) -there is an outline around the eyes(unrealistic) -the eye lids are too dark other than that, i love your new style! keep up the great work |
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Nov 17 2005, 09:55 PM
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i lost weight with Mulder! Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,070 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 79,019 |
i posted the wrong one. check again.
and theres an outline because i always add outlines. and its there to eventually connect to the eyelashes. you wont see it after all the makeup and such. |
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Nov 17 2005, 10:34 PM
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 Call me C.Annie Group: Member Posts: 366 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,994 |
Its good =) But ...
: The teeth look a little choppy : Same with the lips : eyes look to thin to me? |
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Nov 17 2005, 10:36 PM
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My name is really Matt... if you care. Group: Member Posts: 1,442 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 258,234 |
the shape of the face and lips need work
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Nov 17 2005, 11:16 PM
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 I intend to live forever-so far, so good. Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
i love the way your layers are smooth looking, and you cant tell em apart like most vectors. usually when ppl use a lot of contrast the transition is harsh, but not in your case
 great job. try making your features more definate, like the nose is a lil too blended into the face. its gonna turn our really good when its down
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Nov 17 2005, 11:19 PM
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 Froggie! Woof woof. :D Group: Member Posts: 1,423 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,146 |
it's ok i guess. i would prefer it if there was more contrast and if you didn't smudge the colors. you can't really see the nose. and i could see you used the selection tool in some areas
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Nov 17 2005, 11:36 PM
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 Peggy. Group: Member Posts: 2,508 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 214,025 |
It is well so far but needs some improvement on the eyes and the lips.
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Nov 18 2005, 01:54 PM
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 Don't wake ghostie. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,546 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 2,405 |
QUOTE(TheSpoon @ Nov 17 2005, 11:19 PM) it's ok i guess. i would prefer it if there was more contrast and if you didn't smudge the colors. you can't really see the nose. and i could see you used the selection tool in some areas  I agree. But I love your designs Michelle, always original. |
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