Rollercoaster, poem |
Rollercoaster, poem |
Nov 17 2005, 10:25 AM
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blahblahblah. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 690 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 67,045 |
huh well here's a little something I wrote:
Rollercoaster My head is whirling my hair flying I feel as if I have no heart. and I must be miles high in the air The world is invisible to my eyes, because I close them in anticipation or is it fright? The neon lights contrast against the black sky as I scream and scream The screaming does not perturb me but seizes me in the thrill, of the drop in which I fall for eternity… I may be dying yet if this is death I adore it more than anything And then I am alive I imagine I’m a bird flying and climbing, groping speeding dropping screaming gradually stopping, stopping. The nightmare is over my insane pleasure terminated my hearing returns and the noise engulfs me my senses are aware as I walk away and I am sorrowful that is has stopped. (it's about riding the millenium force hehe |
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violini Rollercoaster Nov 17 2005, 10:25 AM
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