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 Nov 14 2005, 11:48 PM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
this is inspired by those times when your ex and you might rekindle that fire you had, but then they pour a bucket of water on it.
Kissing a Ghost Autumn nights Brisk with crunching leaves To think all hallows eve Would reveal that nothing’s what it seems As I prepared to face the monsters I would feel her dark embrace Feel her cheek against my face Only to find no one the next day, gone without a trace And now I find myself Holding the deceased As though that fateful night last year Never took place And now I find myself With no one here at all But kissing the ghost of my love once lost Kissing the ghost of my love forever lost She haunts me In the back of my mind That touch, once so kind Now sends shivers up and down my spine Face my fears At the rebel’s masquerade Her ghost began to fade As I knelt and begged “oh, please don’t go away” And now I find myself Holding the deceased As though that fateful night last year Never took place And now I find myself With no one here at all But kissing the ghost of my love once lost Kissing the ghost of my love forever lost |
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Nov 15 2005, 12:56 PM
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 Don't wake ghostie. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,546 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 2,405 |
Okay, I usually don't really read most of the things in here. But that was truly amazing, I love your style and word use!
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Nov 15 2005, 04:33 PM
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 I love Havasupai Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 |
Great job!
I found these lines to be extremely effective QUOTE As I prepared to face the monsters I would feel her dark embrace Feel her cheek against my face Such a haunting memory! Those lines are rather chilling! |
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Nov 16 2005, 02:33 AM
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^^
agreed! very well written! nice work as always. 
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