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i swear
azn_at_heart
post Nov 9 2005, 12:58 AM
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some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown
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i swear for us to stay together
and to be apart never
lets swear that if fate rip us to shreds
that we'll be thinking of each our heads
i swear with all my heart
that even in death we will stay together and never part
i try to live till tommorow and to give up hope, never
so i can stay with u even just a little longer
i promise to protect u ill give up my life
cause i love u, wishing that one day u'll be my wife
when i die ill go to heaven and wait for u to come
so our souls can be together and again be one
even if we live in diffrent worlds...look at my face
focus inside my eyes and concentrate, dont haste
i see u in my eyes and u see me in ure eyes, im here next to u right now
so before we return to our diffrent worlds lets make this sacred vow
to be together in health, death, and in sickness
in that time each other we both will cherish


i dont post poems alot on my xanga and thats were i 1st post all of them so visit it for more but thats only to see my work (the "-->" and "<--" on my sig)
 
*torngemini*
post Nov 9 2005, 01:51 AM
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that's like a beautiful wedding vow it's so nice
 
azn_at_heart
post Nov 9 2005, 04:44 PM
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some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown
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i noe, i think u saw it at........nm i might save this for a long time later or not......i dunno
 
RiddleMeWonders
post Nov 9 2005, 09:26 PM
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fell in love with a boy
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I like it, well done.
 
azn_at_heart
post Nov 16 2005, 08:50 AM
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some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown
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thx but i still dunno if i should post all my new poems in createblog also.................
 

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