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Operation.
Midnight Faerie
post Nov 4 2005, 09:49 PM
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i'm such a sucker sometimes.
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Standing in the middle of the operating room
Here I am, center stage
Let me stick the knife in the patient's heart
Each cut becoming deeper,
He looks at me with terror
Blue eyes becoming cold
I simply smile my sweetest,
Plunge the dagger deeper inside his heart
"It won't hurt a bit" I tell him,
The lie he promised to me so long ago

I hear the sirens blaring
Another victim to his crime
Another pawn in his game of chess
Taken by the King.
The fluorescent lights beat down on me
Operating table, empty of a body,
Poor patient, we couldn't save him
I came just in time.

My heartbeats count the seconds
As I wait for his beloved
"I'm sorry" I say, which is a lie
The same lie that he told to me
Now it's time to return the favor.
Emergency exit signs gleam brightly,
Leave now, before it's too late.





Yeah... I'm not too sure what this is. Don't be too harsh, it's not a real piece of finished work. Just something I made up as I went along.
 

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Midnight Faerie   Operation.   Nov 4 2005, 09:49 PM
Bobblehead425   thats awesome. i love it. very intense.   Nov 4 2005, 09:55 PM
o0olaalaa   wow its amazing.   Nov 4 2005, 10:06 PM


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