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 Oct 19 2005, 07:05 PM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
yea. that idea for music mensioned in "somewhere safe for monsters" stayed the same, but the band and i decided to change it a bit and completely rewrite the lyrics. it's now about that feeling you get before you're about to go somewhere. that feeling that something incredibly will happen that will change your life for the better.
On the Horizon From where I see the setting sun Is where a new kind of light shines I can feel it in the atmosphere Something’s going down tonight I’m such a pessimist But tonight I’m feeling strange The misfortune I’m used to I think, for once, is about to change I feel the levitation This night will stand out from the rest I’ll find something I’m missing This night might be one of the best I can remember A brand new light is shining On the horizon It burns my eyes but makes me smile at the same time A brand new light will show me That certain something I’ve been missing I just know that something will change my life tonight The aura of the night Forecasting serendipity Arrive at the destination And find my destiny There is an exit to this An exit to this stagnant place This repetition I’m accustomed to I think, for once, is about to change I feel the levitation This night will stand out from the rest I’ll find something I’m missing This night might be one of the best I can remember A brand new light is shining On the horizon It burns my eyes but makes me smile at the same time A brand new light will show me That certain something I’ve been missing I just know that something will change my life tonight I hear it now The sound of change There is an exit to this An exit to this stagnant place This repetition I’m accustomed to I think, for once, is about to change A brand new light is shining On the horizon It burns my eyes but makes me smile at the same time A brand new light will show me That certain something I’ve been missing I just know that something will change my life tonight Change my life tonight (the best I can remember) |
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| *not_your_average* |
Oct 23 2005, 08:28 PM
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I really like the concept of the song. However, your flow is fairly awkward, and I didn't really understsand how some of the verses fit into the song.
E.g.: I feel the levitation This night will stand out from the rest I’ll find something I’m missing This night might be one of the best I can remember How does levitation fit into the song? Also, the last line seems out of place with the rest of the verse. |
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Oct 23 2005, 10:23 PM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
levitation meaning you're so excited that you feel lighter than air. and the last line is actually repeated. i just got lazy.
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| *torngemini* |
Oct 24 2005, 07:36 PM
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I love these lines:
QUOTE A brand new light is shining On the horizon It burns my eyes but makes me smile at the same time I just loved it |
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Oct 24 2005, 09:02 PM
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ooh, i quite liked it. the whole premise and everything is great.
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