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 Jun 6 2004, 08:55 PM
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 Dark Lord of McCandless  Group: Member Posts: 2,226 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,761  |
You stole my part about the girl getting shot... only you do it more realistically which reflects poorly on me lol.
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Jun 7 2004, 12:21 AM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967 |
QUOTE(ComradeRed @ Jun 6 2004, 8:55 PM) You stole my part about the girl getting shot... only you do it more realistically which reflects poorly on me lol. I'm sorry I stole your part, and really, you're a much better writer than I am o.o |
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Jun 7 2004, 07:32 AM
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 angel~^^* Group: Member Posts: 66 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,302 |
wow~very descriptive and sort of emotional~i like it! keep writing~
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Jun 28 2004, 11:58 PM
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ChErRiE Group: Member Posts: 118 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,067 |
wow! that was good..i didnt expect it to end like that..i thought it was going to be different..but then again i really wasnt sure how it was going to end..i like the fact that u let the reader choose how it ended..instead of them dying and whatnot ur really good..keep up the good work..
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Jun 29 2004, 12:27 PM
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 hello. Group: Member Posts: 1,105 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 23,600 |
awww you should reallie think of geing yur writings published
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Jun 30 2004, 05:07 PM
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nice story. the ending was a little confusing, but that's okay. You're a really REALLY good writer.
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Jul 7 2004, 11:25 AM
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I am Sandy. Hear me roar. Group: Member Posts: 1,152 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,896 |
oh wow... i love that story... its so good!!! I love the ending! you should really get that published [you;re so lucky, getting your belly button pierced xD]
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Jul 7 2004, 11:58 PM
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Crying Behind Blind Eyes Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967 |
Okay, guys, I was thinking about starting a new story ^^! Got any suggestions you'd like this one to be like?
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Jul 19 2004, 09:36 PM
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 Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
I love the whole story. But the ending, I don't want to choose. Lol. Cause if Elise and Lucien died together fighting for what they believe in, that'll be great, but if they were alive and have a child, that's sweet too.
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Jul 24 2004, 01:49 AM
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 PaRtY Ch!c Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,529 |
when i read the first chapter i was soo shocked!!! i tot u were writing about my fren!!! she started goin out with her bf 4 days after val, her bf took sm otha girl to the prom too, he'd call her alot. OMG it freaked me out.. haha well yah really gd storry!!!!
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Jul 27 2004, 07:14 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 164 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,737 |
that was nice =]
but truthfully...i didnt like the epilouge.. i want to read what happens.....even tho you said the end is for our choice...but that's no fun 
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