another poem from 8th grade Options

[Mulder]

since i wasnt laughed at last time, and i still need to get my post count up, why not post more poems from my huge poetry project.

so this was...a pantoum.

When they kiss, she gets a fright,
But love is nothing scary.
Later she feels light,
And a little wary.

But love is nothing scary,
She knew that it would end,
And a little wary,
Her love for him will not bend.

She knew that it would end,
Love goes its own way.
Her love for him will not bend,
There is nothing that she can say.

Love goes its own way,
When they kiss, she gets a fright.
There is nothing that she can say,
Later she feels light.


my limerick:
The Sweet Aroma of Love

The lovers sat down for tea
The cutest couple there could be
The girl started smelling
The man began yelling
“Put deodorant on for me!”


thats it. the rest are pretty bad, so im not gonna show them.


comment. or not. either way, my post count goes up one.

[Paradox of Life]

The first poem is kind of hard to follow (you'd think the reptition would engrain it in my head), but I think the rhyming scheme made the poem lose meaning.

The second is cute, but I can't help but think what man would say that?

[Mulder]

well, thats what a pantoum is. its in a pattern so you only write 8 lines, and they repeat themselves.

and the second...i thought it was funny.





my post per day went up .1 doo da doo da. my post per day went up .1 o doo da day!

[rainnydaiis]

^ Haha you must really care about your posts. But the 1st poem is good judging that it repeats many times =P.

Anyways good poems. I had a good read =P.