Tuesday September 27th 2005, i invested in a book specifically for me |
Tuesday September 27th 2005, i invested in a book specifically for me |
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![]() fell in love with a boy ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 ![]() |
Tonight I feel compelled to just, simply as possible, write. Not caring if it's bad, because I know that in all possibility it will be very bad writing. Not from my head, not from that area which dictates whether something is what people will like or what will further render them to the conclusion that I am that which is not fit to be called a "writer." The only thing I've been able to truly, truly want to write about is home. Tomorrow I will write of her beauty, tonight I will write of my longing for her.
When may I go home? To answer every simple question with my own is what I've been of here in this city in a strangers home strange as I can be and feeling alone The tasks you put before me drove us all away Waiting, here I am Please forgive my words I am grateful, please believe me But I can't and don't want to stay There the wreckage has been found Lives have been shattered Homes torn from their respective grounds No matter what we do, where we go Home stays on our lips A word bringing both comfort and hope It is home that forced me here An now that calls me near Though it will take some time I still want, We all want more than anything to go home. |
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![]() Yawn ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 ![]() |
I think you are overlooked here on Createblog...
by far one of the best writers on here. And by the way you are a "writer"...a good one too...an excellent one. Your paragraph before your poem even touched me. And with each passing word it draws you in even more. You have a gift :) Keep using it. |
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