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REBELnDISGUISE
post Aug 26 2005, 07:27 PM
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my heart is broken
i try to fix it
but nothings working
i buy a new one
it doesnt fit
i try again
countless times
i have failed
i want you to see
can you see
the best thing in front of you
which is me

ive mend my heart
i sewed it up
13 stitches
it hurts so much
6 weeks pass
my heart has healed
i guess i was blind
cause now its clear
i need you to see
please can you see
the greatest thing right in front of you
which was me
 

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REBELnDISGUISE   heart   Aug 26 2005, 07:27 PM
yukichan   i like it..it has good rhythim(sp?)..   Aug 28 2005, 12:09 AM
Hiphop d[-_-]b   ^ agreed. it was like a pausing flow. at least tha...   Aug 28 2005, 07:09 PM
kill.t3h.r0cK   Haha, agreed w/ both of them. It read very smooth.   Aug 31 2005, 12:21 PM
Claudel   smooth and nice :)   Aug 31 2005, 01:55 PM


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