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antwerp, a poem
megumint
post Jul 23 2009, 12:31 AM
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all's feeling
now i know
you are who
circumstance
tells me i must
sleep in your bed
and whisper to
your future thoughts
that every action
i have not yet done
has traced your
image into stars
and i long to breathe out
to the cold unforgiving night
a burst of warm moist air
and, as if by accident,
hear your name
rolling from my tongue
 
Ekay
post Jul 29 2009, 09:25 PM
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that's pretty dope.

and whisper to
your future thoughts
that every action
i have not yet done
has traced your
image into stars

that's pretty powerful too. this was enjoying to read :)
 

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