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 Oct 15 2009, 08:51 PM
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 Funride.org  Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299  |
I dont like it, I just wanna see what you guys have to say.
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Oct 15 2009, 09:02 PM
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 /人◕‿‿◕人\ Group: Official Member Posts: 8,283 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 602,927 |
Looks like shit. Bad color choices.
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Oct 15 2009, 09:04 PM
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 (′ ･ω･｀) Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,179 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,477 |
oh. i never thought her boobs were actually that big, thought she was kinda flat. anyway. the picture on the right, she wearing black, doesnt fit in since the other two are wearing red stripes. maybe choose different pictures?
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Oct 15 2009, 09:45 PM
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Funride.org Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299 |
Okay!
New style it is! |
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Oct 16 2009, 12:11 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
I agree with Julia. The center image looks weird because the one on the left is brighter. Make sure to always edit your images the same way.
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Oct 16 2009, 05:14 PM
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 ICE CREAM ♥ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 405 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 699,617 |
There are a few things here. (1) I would change the colors to complement the images you're using. It will look more cohesive, and right now it's looking imbalanced to the left because the two images are very similar. (2) It does look a bit empty in the background right under the text. It may be that you don't want anything there and it will get too busy, but that's something that stood out to me. (3) Your three images are very similar -- notice the way she turns her head and how it's the same in each one. It's very redundant. Mixing those up, and getting different poses should help.
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Oct 16 2009, 05:18 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
I saw on the cutout on the upper right that there's visible text going over her body. I think it looks better if you have text go behind her rather than having it on her belly.
I think the blends could be closer and the blue textures you used are appealing, however the colors do not fit with the image scheme. Try changing up the colors. |
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