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 Jul 19 2005, 12:15 AM
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 ~*The Blackanese One*~  Group: Member Posts: 37 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,860  |
It's my first layout outside of xanga. What do you guys think? Click here. Feel free to hate all you want. I need the critisism [sp] And does any1 know of any good tutorials? Xnaga or not. I've found my new obsession
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Jul 19 2005, 12:17 AM
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 NO. I'm not 13. or 14. or 15. or 16. Group: Member Posts: 4,616 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,577 |
It says the page is not found..
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Jul 19 2005, 12:18 AM
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 GREEENROCKS Group: Member Posts: 1,393 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,624 |
it said something like page not found..
did you link it correctly or is my internet lying to me? 
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Jul 19 2005, 12:26 AM
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~*The Blackanese One*~ Group: Member Posts: 37 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,860 |
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Jul 19 2005, 12:27 AM
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GREEENROCKS Group: Member Posts: 1,393 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,624 |
you might want to tone the background down and use graphics that match for the top for your retro theme..
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Jul 19 2005, 03:39 AM
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 Proud to be an Anime Otaku Group: Member Posts: 667 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 165,004 |
GAH! It look slike you just put a whole bunch of things together! Try having everything match a bit better...
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Jul 19 2005, 09:41 AM
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 ;) Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 |
I like the top banner, but the bottom background doesn't match at all. Try making a background that matches what you have at the top.
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Jul 19 2005, 11:29 AM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
QUOTE alvin_ward155 Posted Jul 19 2005, 9:41 AM I like the top banner, but the bottom background doesn't match at all. Try making a background that matches what you have at the top. Yea. The background looks too colored and busy. Maybe some nice stripes? |
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Jul 19 2005, 11:30 AM
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NO. I'm not 13. or 14. or 15. or 16. Group: Member Posts: 4,616 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,577 |
Moved to Website Showcase
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Jul 19 2005, 08:09 PM
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 ich heisse Meli. Group: Member Posts: 909 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 122,016 |
OW. I hate to be mean, but it looks like you just took Heather's tutorial and started slapping images in there. Tone it down, match it together, etc and so forth. Ouch.
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Jul 19 2005, 11:37 PM
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 What? Group: Member Posts: 709 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 92,823 |
Its going to give someone a suisure! yea.. ok here are the issues I have with the site.
1) Too many colors in background 2) Header looks like pictures pasted on (you can see bits of white around them) so yea.. maybe you need a little more practice with photoshop. |
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Jul 23 2005, 04:34 AM
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Not bad for your first.
-The header image is a bit choppy, make sure you erase better around images when you paste them on. -The background is too strong, you usually need a solid color if you're going to put text on top of it. Even though the text is white, it's still really hard to read. -The header, the background, and the footer all three don't match. Try to work on that. -The border around your text is a little too thick, it stands out too much. I can tell you put a lot of work into this, so don't give up! Take all the criticism and keep trying. :) |
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Jul 28 2005, 07:18 PM
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 Argh? Group: Member Posts: 745 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 109,836 |
is that with frames?
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Jul 30 2005, 07:42 PM
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The background is too...bleh. Its not my taste. But its your first, so the blog's background can change. Thats all.
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