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Aug 17 2010, 02:11 AM
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Funride.org Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299 |
My design site is officially called Crash & Crave Designs.
The layout is at http://matt-lanter.org/crashandcrave.png I love the layout, tell me what you think. |
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Aug 17 2010, 08:10 AM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
I don't like the main font you used for "Crash & Crave". The small script text you used around Katy Perry is blurry.
Some of those images in the circular shapes could have been a little better quality, and I just think the brackets for Latest Designs is a little bit cheesy. Overall, I like the way you used the main subject though. |
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Aug 17 2010, 08:13 AM
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Onen i-Estel Edain, ú-chebin estel anim. Group: Official Designer Posts: 425 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 653,128 |
1. There are a *lot* of jagged edges on that body.
2. Why is she blotchy and yellow in some parts? 3. Take out that random bar going through the middle 4. Text at the back is blurry/bad quality 5. Take out that horrible outline thing you have around a lot of the stuff 6. That font doesn't really suit the design imo |
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Aug 17 2010, 01:23 PM
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Funride.org Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299 |
1. There are a *lot* of jagged edges on that body. 2. Why is she blotchy and yellow in some parts? 3. Take out that random bar going through the middle 4. Text at the back is blurry/bad quality 5. Take out that horrible outline thing you have around a lot of the stuff 6. That font doesn't really suit the design imo And I can't help the jagged edged, I found this in officialpsds.com The blotchy shit is the shadow from the sun I believe in the original picture. I like the bar. How do you figure, it's not supposed to be readable. I like the outline. I also like the font. |
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Aug 17 2010, 02:22 PM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
And I can't help the jagged edged, I found this in officialpsds.com Once again, just because something came a certain way doesn't make it right. You either have to fix it or not use it at all. I like parts, but nothing is really cohesive. The clouds, scratches, and bulk text in the back look okay...just not with that image, font, or all those bold shapes you used. It's half old school, ghetto myspace site and half classy resource site. |
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Aug 17 2010, 02:59 PM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
You either have to fix it or not use it at all. This. Some things are easy to fix like the text or the sun lighting you mentioned from the original image. I agree 100% with what Firath said and I think if you could make those changes instead of just saying "how much I love this or that and want it stay", your image would come out so much better. |
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Aug 18 2010, 08:27 PM
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Onen i-Estel Edain, ú-chebin estel anim. Group: Official Designer Posts: 425 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 653,128 |
You wanted comments, you get them. If you want to grow as a designer, you have to step away from the "OMGIMSOAWESOME" personality and listen to what people say.
Oh. And fix that blotchy spot. |
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Aug 19 2010, 01:03 AM
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Live long and prosper. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,142 Joined: Apr 2007 Member No: 514,926 |
And I can't help the jagged edged, I found this in officialpsds.com The blotchy shit is the shadow from the sun I believe in the original picture. I like the bar. How do you figure, it's not supposed to be readable. I like the outline. I also like the font. QUOTE I love the layout, tell me what you think. Could you at least try to be open to c&c... |
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Aug 30 2010, 03:02 PM
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사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
Your site is giving my Chrome browser malware warnings.
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