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ryfitaDF
post Nov 15 2005, 12:54 AM
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yea i just noticed i put this in the debate forum accidently. this needs to be moved to writing. sorry.



a memoir of my 16th summer. how i miss that time.

Take Me Back
This isn’t fair!!

It was the dawn after my darkest hour
A rose opened after all my April showers
When the crows finally flew away
My eyes were what linked us together
The entire world was reborn
And it wasn’t because of the weather
Only when I began to sing my sorrow
Did I see for me a brighter tomorrow
That was three years ago this may
Why can’t it still be her today?
(THIS INS’T FAIR!)
About face and spat out my loneliness
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
So many years ago
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
THIS ISN’T FAIR!

Take me back to the new beginning
To the time where I felt alive for a second time
When the sky shed its tears nightly
In the place for the dead that protected me

I was so young and she was so sweet
And I thank god that he would let us meet
And all I can remember is us
Vampires hijacking a train
There was no need to hide
But I still found shelter in the rain
(THIS ISN’T FAIR!)
I lit my fire inside
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
I found it right as I stopped looking
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
I’ve never been lifted like this before
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
After the end of everything I was reborn
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!

There were a hundred people
The sky was royal purple
I saw a gem, a hole in the tarp
A tunnel from the prison in which I was confined
She was an angel delivering me from my hell
Whipped away my grey sky with the slightest whim
She tempted me with her gregarious charm
It was a dream come true straight out of a fairy tale
My interest in her found its way to the surface
As she filtered through the dozens of people
I followed her up the steps to the balcony
Looked her in the eye. Closed mine
And I thought “could this be it?”
I moved in closer to plant the kiss
Her lips then came towards mine
Contact! Then I woke up.
THIS ISN’T FAIR!
I screamed “I think I’m in love!”
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
I swear it was bliss solidified
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
Sweet 16, I miss you!
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
Take me back!
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
Please take me back to those days
They’re why I’m still alive today
(TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!)
Please take me back to those days
Take me back to those days!
(TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!
TAKE ME BACK! TAKE ME BACK!)
 
Gigi
post Nov 15 2005, 01:28 AM
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Moved to Writing =)
 
ryfitaDF
post Nov 15 2005, 02:19 PM
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thank you =]
 

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