I'm Terrible At This., Poem. :) |
I'm Terrible At This., Poem. :) |
May 23 2009, 02:08 PM
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So this is a poem I wrote awhile ago, but it's probably one of my favorites I've written. :)
Years have passed And people have come and gone But the memories of you wont fade away You’re like a tumor that won’t stop growing It’s just I’m terrible at saying this I can’t scream it out It’s just so hard The days have slowly gone by My friends and family decreasing every day You seemed to be the only one, only one That ever impacted on me Thoughts of you make me cry and weak I’m terrible at saying how much I miss you How much it doesn’t feel like the same I just cant It’s hard, why can’t it always be easy? Why can’t my mind let you go and live? I can’t tell you my life’s great Knowing your not here to share it with It makes it harder to know we wont have moments To laugh about I hate knowing that I’m alone in this world I’m terrible at saying how messed up I am Telling the world all I need to do is let it out With every second going by, I might smile a bit Knowing that it brings me closer to seeing you again Knowing I would hold you and tell you everything How much I missed you And how much I love you I’m terrible at saying this but I need you I can’t do this a lone, I’m sorry Tears will be shed And too many nights will be wasted on you How your not here and I’m too upset to go out Too upset to live because of you I’m terrible at saying this but someday I will live I will live like you were here beside me I’m terrible at saying this It’s just awful to know I’ll move on It’s sick to have this pain in me Of how much I miss you Soon, soon is will disappear. Soon |
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May 23 2009, 02:10 PM
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/人◕‿‿◕人\ Group: Official Member Posts: 8,283 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 602,927 |
No rhythm.
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May 23 2009, 02:24 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,036 Joined: May 2009 Member No: 727,246 |
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May 23 2009, 02:30 PM
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/人◕‿‿◕人\ Group: Official Member Posts: 8,283 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 602,927 |
No rhyme, rhythm, structure.
Would be alright in iambic pentameter. But it's not even close. |
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