good rap i made up, no racism, not stupid, and not copied. |
good rap i made up, no racism, not stupid, and not copied. |
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Apr 5 2005, 07:46 PM
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your too wack to compete your damn lyrics aint even complete my rap game is neat so go ahead and take a seat watch my show y'all gonna feel me when i feel da flow dont make my minds blow im here to bring hip-hop bigger than fat joe your spits are so slow that make me say whoa your not in my league, your way too below your career is 100% trash my raps are probably quicker than the runnin of steve nash do i make my self clear? dont make me get too high for you, queer this is my year some people hatin on me cuz my raps include racism and dont worry this will be no more plagiarism this is the end of all go ahead sent this to yo friend dont piss me off again or ill start a brawl worse than the pacers and ron artest i hope you dont get too stressed, god ill be blessed |
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Apr 6 2005, 03:38 AM
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hello : ) Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139 |
Man...people are just bashing on you. I wholeheartedly agree with everything KissMe2408 said. Anyways, a lot of it didn't make sense because it seemed like you focused more on making sure it rhymed than anything else. Like some of it doesn't agree, for example, when you said "make my minds blow". You have multiple minds? Maybe it was just a typo, who knows? And yeah, there is no flow whatsoever. It looks like you stuck random words and lines together and tried to make sure they rhymed. At least you didn't copy it this time.
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