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 Jan 21 2010, 06:25 AM
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 Senior Member  Group: Official Designer Posts: 339 Joined: Mar 2009 Member No: 721,527  |
Biggest thing I've done in a while. For my job. Warning, it's big.
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Jan 21 2010, 09:33 AM
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 ‹(. .)› Group: Official Member Posts: 2,367 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,089 |
you create awesome work, encompassing both great aesthetics and substance. btw, did you have to come up with all that writing yourself? i'd go crazy trying to summarize the history of anything.
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Jan 21 2010, 12:52 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
Looks very colorful and something of a professional brochure I would see at the airport. Me likey.
My only comment is that the transitioning of each block could have been a bit more smooth ( for all of the colors ). |
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Jan 21 2010, 01:55 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
yaa looks good, maybe fade the colors in transition though
Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Jan 21 2010, 04:13 PM
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 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
The map under 1400s - white text is hard to read. I'm not loving that section in general. Overall, nice job.
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Jan 21 2010, 07:47 PM
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 Pocketful of Sunshine Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,690 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 289,004 |
I'm glad you found a way to fix the problem you had before on the bottom with the four boxes.
 I like the random comments, they're pretty cute. I think I already mentioned this is my favorite piece of yours. Aaaand I can't believe I didn't catch the white text Gabi pointed out! 
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Jan 21 2010, 08:23 PM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
I'd like to add one more thing which is the part that says "really, check this out"
I don't think that's really necessary...I mean I understand the whole concept and the comments throughout the image, it's just a bit pushy childish thing. but idk, maybe your bosses might love it? |
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Jan 21 2010, 08:59 PM
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사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
QUOTE(iDecay @ Jan 21 2010, 04:47 PM)  Aaaand I can't believe I didn't catch the white text Gabi pointe out! At first I misread this as saying you didn't catch this at all. I then proceeded to ss with my iPod, rotate and edit the image, upload to Tumblr (since Tinypic doesn't work on iPods), and copy the image link. Then I reread what you said. And went, oh. Here's the link if anyone wants to see it anyways |
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Jan 21 2010, 10:56 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
Aw this is a very cute idea. But I agree with Beenly and Gabrielle. It's nice though!
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