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 Feb 8 2005, 03:10 PM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
Anomalous in the sense that im easily explained
a rebel in the sense that i conform different in the sense that im exactly the same and sketching perfection... naive in the sense that i know it all popular in the sense that they dont know who i am in love in the sense that i know only hate and sketching perfection... shallow in the sense of hidden depths dark in the sense that the light shines through finished in the sense that i'll never stop and sketching perfection... mute in the sense that im shouting tone deaf in the sense that life's a melody constant in the sense that im never the same and sketching perfection... heartfelt in the sense that i dont care beautiful in the sense of a monster ok in the sense that im so f**ked up that i dont know where to begin a portrait of perfection... |
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Feb 8 2005, 08:38 PM
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not bad. i like it. has a nice flow to it.
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Feb 8 2005, 11:24 PM
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 ^ I might look scary but i'm the nicest person in cb! Group: Member Posts: 1,364 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,979 |
really sketch out a iamge of perfection
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Feb 8 2005, 11:32 PM
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 I have eccentric ideas... Group: Member Posts: 169 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,035 |
I like it... I write poetry, but I usually don't post it... Just for my eyes only I guess... ;)
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