Individuality...It's a Beautiful Thing!, A song I wrote... |
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 Feb 3 2005, 01:33 AM
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 It's "Rock The CASBAH"! NOT CATWALK!  Group: Member Posts: 282 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 34,989  |
First off I wanna say I wuzn't sure where 2 place this topic, & I tried 2 pic the best place this topic belonged in...so don't knock me 4 "putting it in the wrong place."
But yeah, this is a song I wrote called "Forever Young"...sorry if it's too long  . It's kinda a biographical song of James Dean's, Marilyn Monroe's, & Jim Morrison's Lives, but I'm just gonna do the James Dean verse & the chorus cuz it's TOO long. So here it goes  ...This is Dedicated to the ones Who will always be... FOREVER YOUNG Oh Jimmy Mr. Dean Looked as if he steped out of a dream Had a girl who was as beautiful as can be She went by the name of Pier Angeli Everything was all goo, there seemed to be no problem There was only one thing in the way, her big Italian mama Always brought the drama Saying "He's not the one...that you will marry" "He's not Catholic, he won't let that racing quit, & he's not my pick" So when Jimmy was ready to film "Rebel" Pier told him "Sorry, but this is farewell" "My family comes first And I'm marring another sir" Jimmy was so sad, he was so depressed He lost what he considered in his life was the best as time went by Jimmy started acting out of line And then came that awful night ...He was racing on the asphaul ...Then he destroyed "Little Bastard" But that wasn't all That's when James Dean's life came to a halt Chorus: This is dedicate to the ones, who will always be forever young Their memory will alway be in our thoughts And our love for them in our hearts To us you are true icons Too bad that so early you were gone You are the ones we never forgot I just love the chorus cuz it expresses wut I, and many, feel for these late greats. So wut U guyz think ?
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Feb 3 2005, 01:47 AM
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 cameraman swing the focus! Group: Member Posts: 1,880 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,328 |
that's awesome. i wish i was talented to write a song.
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Feb 3 2005, 01:51 AM
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It's "Rock The CASBAH"! NOT CATWALK! Group: Member Posts: 282 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 34,989 |
QUOTE(FLIPxADDICTION @ Feb 3 2005, 1:47 AM) that's awesome. i wish i was talented to write a song.   Tanx...Tanx, I'm glad U like it!AND OOOPS!!! I 4got 2 change the name of the topic  ...I wuz gonna put my other song "Individuality" up, but then changed it  ...OH WELL  !
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Feb 3 2005, 02:25 AM
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hey nicely done...though i think this should be in the writing forum if its your work.
nice though.
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Feb 3 2005, 02:56 PM
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 [*]i AM your star!![*] Group: Member Posts: 1,301 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,520 |
Wow what a great song. This might be put into the writing forum though.
It is excellently written though. Great job 
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Feb 3 2005, 02:58 PM
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 blah Group: Member Posts: 57 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 94,113 |
Great job! its a nice song, ur really talented ! ^__^
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Feb 3 2005, 04:46 PM
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 Hello there. Group: Member Posts: 343 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 78,879 |
Lol. I'd love to hear the actual song itself. I have no talent whatsoever when it comes to poetry/song writing. That's really great, very original. Kudos to ya!
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Feb 4 2005, 01:29 AM
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It's "Rock The CASBAH"! NOT CATWALK! Group: Member Posts: 282 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 34,989 |
Hey tanx
 ! I'm glad U guyz like it  ! Yeah, I figured I put it in the wrong forum cuz I had a gut feeling, but I didn't see a writing forum  ?...but wutevah!QUOTE(ahhishkaren @ Feb 3 2005, 4:46 PM) Lol. I'd love to hear the actual song itself. I have no talent whatsoever when it comes to poetry/song writing. That's really great, very original. Kudos to ya! Yeah, Maybe later I'll add the other 2 verses. BUT TANX 4 THE COMMENTS !!!
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