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 Jan 28 2005, 06:56 PM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
a more motivational version of "the RX testemate"
FORCE OF WILL Are you people or cattle in the herd? Are you chimps in laboratories or something more? You have the force of will on your side And with it you can do anything Ask me how I’m scaling mountains While you’re still tripping over molehills Ask me how I stay so positive While you’re still popping pills Tell me that I’m strong But I’m a person just like you I can make the best of things And I’m sure that you can, too You are the most powerful thing you know The only problem is you won’t let it show The entire universe is on your shoulders, but you can still Take care of things with your force of will Ask me how I walk a mile While you’re still tying your shoes Ask me how I’m tickled pink While you’re still singing the blues Cause I don’t rely on chemicals I force myself to cope Ourselves and our friends is all we need Life’s too short to constantly mope You are the most powerful thing you know The only problem is you won’t let it show The entire universe is on your shoulders, but you can still Take care of things with your force of will |
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| *Kathleen* |
Jan 28 2005, 07:04 PM
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I like the last stanza.
 *Still wishes she had your talent*
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Jan 29 2005, 02:13 AM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
QUOTE I like the last stanza. thumbsup.gif *Still wishes she had your talent* Haha, same here...That's basically what I was going to say. :P [steals some talent] >:| Excellent job as always. :D |
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| *stephinika* |
Jan 29 2005, 03:38 AM
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sounds great. i love your style of writing.
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| *wind&fire* |
Jan 29 2005, 08:25 AM
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its great but the pattern of rhyming confuses me...
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Jan 29 2005, 09:11 AM
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 Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705 |
Dang. I really really like that.
I looked at it as directed towards me, and I still don't understand how you stay so positive. 
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Jan 29 2005, 12:04 PM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967 |
Hmm. I like this, and your right. It is more motivational than "The RX Testemate".
QUOTE Ask me how I’m scaling mountains While you’re still tripping over molehills Ask me how I stay so positive While you’re still popping pills Those were my favorite lines. Out of the two pieces: RX Testemate and Force of Will....I think I like RX Testemate better, just because it seems more direct, and not as motivational. I don't know if that makes in sense. Heh. Keep on writing always. |
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