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 Jan 25 2005, 09:16 PM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes  Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967  |
The Lost
By: Savannah Harrison It was just another fragile heart, Drowning in the sea. Just another angel, Throwing out their broken harp. The Devil's won the battle, Mankind's evil enough. God will take to crying, Watching another failing race. This world is like a whisper, Left to die out on it's own. A masquerade of mindless drones, A house of replicas and clones. It's the bled; not the bleeding, And the streets are paved in red. We're bruised from our beating, And we think we're better off just dead. The morgues are overflowing, This town it smells of rot. Living without loving, Can't be any better than not. One more person fades, And another heart is lost... |
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| *stephinika* |
Jan 25 2005, 10:16 PM
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wow well done. i love the concept and just the flow/way it was written. nice job!
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Jan 25 2005, 11:31 PM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
incredible. couldn't have done a better job myself. *thumbs up*
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Jan 26 2005, 03:29 AM
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 she doesn't even know Group: Member Posts: 501 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,065 |
*applaudes*
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