the hill.., a sonnet |
 Jan 18 2005, 07:55 PM
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 i need an sn change.  Group: Member Posts: 1,915 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,746  |
i wrote this in english class and ya.
Outside on the hill, we stood together. Under the moon and stars, we watched time go by. As time rolled, our weak teen love grew stronger. We hoped to stay together, never say goodbye. The quiet town we watched, not a single sound. We laughed and smiled, keeping each other company. We realized after time passed by, what was found. Till this day we are together, sweet as harmony. We go back up that hill, after all these years. The same stars, the same moon, the same quiet town. We were going back in time, but with no fears. We just sat and smiled, never a frown. More time has passed, we still have each other. Living on that hill, always together. |
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Jan 18 2005, 10:28 PM
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wow i really like it. very simple and sweet.
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Jan 19 2005, 10:13 PM
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i need an sn change. Group: Member Posts: 1,915 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,746 |
awesome. i got a 100 on it, hell ya.
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Jan 22 2005, 05:12 PM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
aww, i loved that! it was so romantic
You def deserved that 100!
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