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RiddleMeWonders
post Jan 19 2005, 09:54 PM
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fell in love with a boy
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I’ve been acting like a victim

Of thoughts too shameful to mention

So divine, this intervention

Set to roam
calling me home

Begging me to stay and say
Things that make it okay

To forget the bad
and the sad

To remember the good

Like we should
 
KissMe2408
post Jan 22 2005, 04:20 PM
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awesome, very touching happy.gif i especially liked this part:
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Begging me to stay and say
Things that make it okay

To forget the bad
and the sad

To remember the good

Like we should

Keep it up!!
 
Gypsy Eyes
post Jan 22 2005, 04:32 PM
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very nice. It seems like there is something missing though, once I figure it out I'll get back to you.
 

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