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ryfitaDF
post Jan 17 2005, 03:08 AM
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this song is about giving up on somone who isn't worth it.

LET YOU DROWN
I prepared myself
Got as pretty as I could
Served myself on a golden platter
Just for you to stick your nose up
Left in the sewer
Words could not describe how much it hurt
But some day I’ll find true love
And you’ll find shit: just what you deserve.

I cried “grab my hand”
But you tied yourself up
Dried the cement around your feet
And tossed yourself off the dock
I dived in after you
Swam to the abyss, I followed you down
You made no effort to escape
So now I’ll f**king let you drown

The foundation’s crumbling
After I gave whatever it would take
But you went past the quota
On extraordinarily thoughtless mistakes
Dismantled by your negligence
A victim of your rebuttal
I know relationships are work
But you’re a f**king struggle

I plead “I have the key”
But you welded the padlocks shut
You gave no reason to assist you
And every reason to give up
I dived in after you
Swam to the abyss, followed you down
You made no attempt to escape
So I’ll f**king let you drown

The bubbles open at the surface
A sign that my efforts were worthless
My commands were your wishes
Now sleep tight with the fishes

I wrote a letter reading “I love you!”
You set a trap for whoever delivered
I never thought our fingers locking
Would resemble a serpentine slither
I dived in after you
Swam to the abyss, followed you down
You didn’t give a shit
Guess what, you c**t, now I let you drown.
I’d do anything/EVERYTHING FOR YOU!
But it still wasn’t enough
I tried to set you free
All you did was tighten your handcuffs
I DIVED IN AFTER YOU
SWAM TO THE ABYSS, FOLLOWED YOU DOWN!
I’D JOIN YOU, BUT I LIKE BREATHING
NOW I LET YOU f**kING DROWN!
 
HelloSunshine
post Jan 17 2005, 03:25 AM
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ooh, I like it, awesome job! thumbsup.gif love the theme _smile.gif
 
TreesTurnMeOn
post Jan 17 2005, 05:44 PM
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ohmy.gif

Do you KNOW how much I want to write like you?! AAAAH! *screams in anger*

That was so rad. I love it. You're right, that is my favorite of all of your works.

Sorry I didn't reply sooner..I was in Tennessee ^^
 
*Kathleen*
post Jan 17 2005, 09:21 PM
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QUOTE
Swam to the abyss, followed you down
You made no attempt to escape
So I’ll f**king let you drown

^ I really like that. Hmm...I wonder who this could be about. tongue.gif I suppose it could apply to me and Dave as well. Hmm...but very good, as always.
 
inthemudhole
post Jan 17 2005, 09:27 PM
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QUOTE
Do you KNOW how much I want to write like you?! AAAAH! *screams in anger*

^ Dude.. I know.. sad.gif

Damn, you're good.
I love this one.

I just never know what to say when I'm replying to your stuff.. it's just so.. good. O_O

Great job, as always. [=
 

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