I wish I could die. Options

[lovescream]

Hear, I wrote a poem in 1 minute, it's non rhyming and crappy. I want to die. If I had one wish, I'd wish to die. I hate my grandmother and mom for making me more upset and wishing that I was never born. Thanks a lot.

i hear you screaming at me
it brings pain to my ear
and a movement to stop you
stop you from speaking;
maybe forever.
i despise the f**king sound of your voice
everytime you speak i feel like stabbing you
repeatedly,
over and over again.
you can't bring joy and happiness to me
all you can do is make me more angry,
more f**ked up.
i wish i was never here,
since i met you, life has been terrible,
horrible,
but irresistable to keep on breathing.
but, i wish you could f**king die,
and leave the world in peace.

>_<

[inthemudhole]

Easy to relate to.
I'm in basically the same situation.

I like it.

Nice job for such a short writing process. =)

[KissMe2408]

Wow, i can really feel your hurt and anger through this poem. I know this might sound dumb and you might not believe it, but my heart actually hurts for you and your situation. I have been through similiar situations, and i have had many thoughts about wishing i was dead. I hate to see someone else going through somethan like this. The poem was excellent, keep it up. If you ever just want to rant and rave about your life, go ahead. it's good to get it out. I'll pray for you, even if you don't believe in prayer, it's ok.

[*Kathleen*]

Aww. As Brie and Kate have previously mentioned, I can relate to you completely. Both of my parents seem to always be yelling at my sister and I for some reason. It makes my eye twitch. Writing is a great way to express yourself. Just think...only a few more years and you're legally able to get away from them.

[ryfitaDF]

that's some norma jean type stuff right there. i like.

[krispy_kreme333]

very good! i can relate to this so much but im not as talented as some people are in writing so keep writing, your doing great