i don't have a name for this one yet Options

[ryfitaDF]

edit: i have a name

NEVER STEP OUTSIDE AGAIN
i'm probably going to add to it later. herre ya go.

Have you ever woken up at the sound of your own screams
From your funeral dreams, mourning you and me?
Do you ever wish that you could ever regain
The something between us you chose not to retain?
Well I
Would like to take this time to tell you not to hold your breath
Even though I feel the same way, I’m just to scared to confess

I know too well what it’s like to be
Ripped in shreds by cupid’s hands
In this situation
Nothing ever goes as it’s planned

Rejection cold and wet and
I just want to get out of the rain
And never go outside again
Never live another day
Leave the world to kill it’s self
I tire being deep shades of blue
Try to sleep forever and ignore
All the things I’m tethered to

My hesitation is a scar, a memento from your act
I dare not climb these walls at risk of falling down this cataract again
You can’t be a victim of theft if all you own is air
And you’ll never be happy but you’ll never be sad if you never even care
Well it’s
Too close to tell if I’ll be receive any message you send
As part of my desire to never see the light of day again

I know too well what it’s like to be
Peeled apart, piece by piece
Gnawed on by the mouth of fate
My flesh still in its teeth

Rejection cold and wet and
I just want to get out of the rain
And never go outside again
Never live another day
Leave the world to kill it’s self
I tire being deep shades of blue
Try to sleep forever and ignore
All the things I’m tethered to

Under the cover of my sheets
With every pulse of my heartbeat
Crying in my sanctuary
I pull shut both my curtains
With death is the only way of flirting
Love needs no help in hurting

I’ll never step outside ever again!
I’m never leaving this room again!
I can’t risk the loss again!
I’ll never go outside AGAIN!!!

[*Kathleen*]

I know too well what it’s like to be
Peeled apart, piece by piece
Gnawed on by the mouth of fate
My flesh still in its teeth

I really like this part, but overall, it was sweeeet. As all of your songs/poems are.

[inthemudhole]

Whoa.
I think this one's my favorite of yours.

I was going to quote my favorite part, but the whole thing is just so damn good.

Great job, as always.

[*wind&fire*]

you could rap this you know...

i like it high emotive

[TreesTurnMeOn]

Wow. That was amazing. You are amazing. ^^ I really really really liked that. You are so great at this.

But anyways. That was super duper splendid. I agree, that was one of my favorites from you.

[inthemudhole]

you could rap this you know...

i like it high emotive

Ehhh. Rapping it would kind of ruin it in my opinion.. but whatever. It's not up to me, for I didn't write it. =]

[TreesTurnMeOn]

Ehhh. Rapping it would kind of ruin it in my opinion.. but whatever. It's not up to me, for I didn't write it. =]

I agree. Rapping is supposed to be about sex and naked people and um..why. O.o

[smthngcrprategrl...]

Have you ever woken up at the sound of your own screams
From your funeral dreams, mourning you and me?
Do you ever wish that you could ever regain
The something between us you chose not to retain?
Well I
Would like to take this time to tell you not to hold your breath
Even though I feel the same way, I’m just to scared to confess

it's good. i especially like this part. i know how that feels.

[*wind&fire*]

I agree. Rapping is supposed to be about sex and naked people and um..why. O.o

tupac- changes