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 Dec 25 2004, 01:06 AM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
You’re literally dying to fit in
Killing yourself to gain you friends You don’t mind being snuffed out If it gives you something to talk about Every Monday morning All I ever f**king hear is How much everyone drank over the weekend Compromising themselves To be in the in group Dig your own grave if it gets you new fake friends You’re literally dying to fit in Killing yourself to gain new friends You don’t mind being snuffed out If it gives you something to talk about You cast me aside for acceptance Jumped face first into the furnace You’ll forget how cool you were When your lack of self-control makes you hurt Good times with Bacardi Good times with a keg Good times in the car crash that severed your two legs Good times hemorrhaging Good times on life support Good times slipping away, loved ones watching you die in the hospital bed You’re literally dying to fit in Killing yourself to gain new friends You don’t mind being snuffed out If it gives you something to talk about You cast me aside for acceptance Jumped face first into the furnace You’ll forget how cool you were When your lack of self-control makes you hurt No broken home is complete without a Beer-swelling negligent shitty ass parent You get to keep the trend alive You’ll be glad I stopped nagging you You’ll be glad I stopped caring And, by god, you better be glad when you die |
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Dec 25 2004, 03:56 PM
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 hopeless dreamer Group: Member Posts: 11 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 74,549 |
you must have had a lot emotion in yourself when you wrote that.
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Dec 25 2004, 09:41 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
That.. was awesome.
Very true, as well. Great job, as always. 
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Dec 27 2004, 09:02 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
that was really good
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Dec 27 2004, 09:24 PM
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 Insane Anime Luver Group: Member Posts: 218 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 74,936 |
wow... that was really nice.
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Dec 30 2004, 12:01 AM
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Ahh sounds like too many people I know at school.
 Very good, though, Wunchbox.
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Dec 31 2004, 05:22 AM
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 boo Group: Member Posts: 5,512 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 71,765 |
i don't know much about poetry. but that sounds good.
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Jan 3 2005, 06:12 PM
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 SCHGEB!SCHGEB! Group: Member Posts: 1,786 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,217 |
that was a very good poem... sounds like people at my school.. bunch of friggin idiots..
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Jan 3 2005, 06:20 PM
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 ¢¾ Wanting it. ¢¾ Group: Member Posts: 2,060 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 39,234 |
Ooh lala, very expressive. I like.
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Jan 9 2005, 01:16 PM
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 Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705 |
QUOTE(Kathleen @ Dec 30 2004, 12:01 AM) Ahh sounds like too many people I know at school. :yaw  Dito. Yeah, you must have a lot of anger when you wrote this. But you make me happy when you use all those cuss words. ^^ It makes me think how right you are. |
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