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 Dec 22 2004, 05:20 PM
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 your sweetest sin.  Group: Member Posts: 416 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,960  |
when i look into my reflection,
all i see is you fading from my side, w/out you, i'm another imperfection. "an imperfection" to the mirror i confide. another fading image... my sobbing fists pound the glass, my image falls and shatters, everything happened so fast, but now, nothing even matters. another shattered heart... we meant so much to each other! i look up, half expecting you there you walk past with another, you're so happy, it isn't fair. another broken girl... the blood's dripping down my hand, but it's really pouring from the heart, all this misery wasn't planned, but then, who'd known we'd come apart? another tear-soaked cheek... i close my eyes and shed my tears, i never knew love's high cost, i loved you for all those years, yet all my love was lost. another, another great love lost. |
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Dec 22 2004, 11:44 PM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
o damn that's a wonderful poem! you described it well...seriously. im thinking of putting that in my xanga someday if you don't mind. don't worry i'll say it's from you. but i dont know your name, what's your name? hehe anyways dannng... some meaningful words there. i dont know if this really was your feelings, but if it was...hope you do feel better again =]
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Dec 27 2004, 01:47 PM
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your sweetest sin. Group: Member Posts: 416 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,960 |
lol thanks!
 my name's audrey. |
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Dec 27 2004, 08:55 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
woah that's really good! it's very desciptive and emotional. i like it!
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Dec 28 2004, 04:22 PM
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your sweetest sin. Group: Member Posts: 416 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,960 |
thanks! glad you guys like it.
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Dec 28 2004, 11:32 PM
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 *aSh* =] Group: Member Posts: 2,075 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,101 |
wow, that's awesome! good job!
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Dec 28 2004, 11:44 PM
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 skaters gonna skate. Group: Official Member Posts: 6,861 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 6,336 |
That's really nice. I like the flow of it.
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Dec 29 2004, 02:17 AM
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your sweetest sin. Group: Member Posts: 416 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,960 |
aww. it's being accepted. *claps*
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