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 Dec 8 2004, 02:29 PM
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 love sucks...big time jessir..  Group: Member Posts: 661 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,644  |
Poem on how I feel sometimes not all the time..
 People who see no other problem but their own close their eyes to reality and shelter themselves from hurt. Those people who never ask "how are you?" or "whats wrong?". Those people who swear that their the only ones feeling these emotions... this pain... Those who dont care what you say,when you said it and how but, at the end of the day they look in the mirror and I think to myself.... What am I turning into? Emmalie |
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Dec 8 2004, 04:50 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
that's good. i feel that way to sometimes.
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Dec 13 2004, 05:28 PM
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Ack. It's all too similar. I like the free verse - very unique.
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Dec 15 2004, 02:11 PM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
^ like kathleen say about the free verse ^^;; even tho i was way out of the line to understand how to read your poem LOL, but it's ok i think i got it >.<;; i think?
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