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this is kinda untitled, NO IT IS NOT TRUE!!!
sp182gc
post Dec 1 2004, 07:33 PM
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This is not true, I REPEAT-this is not true! i was intending to write a hate or depressed poem because i was angry at my dad, but it didn't quite turn out the way i hoped. anyway, i am a proud virgin, so i was just doing this to teach a lesson i guess.


I use to have it all
But maybe it wasn't enough
So I ran to a boy
When my life got too tough

People saw me as perfect
Flawless, you see
But I guess they didn't know
There's another side to me

Put under too much stress
I couldn't take anymore
I changed a lot about me
The old life left me sore

I thought of somewhere to get help
Then I thought--The man of my dreams...
Maybe he could save me
Or so that's how it seemed

I knocked on his front door
He opened it and said,
"What are you doing here?"When I replied,
"I wish that I were dead."

He let me in and led me to
His very own comfy bed
He wanted to talk, but I said no
I'd rather make love instead.

I needed him to take my grief
Not council me and talk
He plays the bad boy at our school
Now lets see him walk-the-walk

Then one fine day, when life got better
I was acting unlike me
I threw up my dinner and felt real sick
And thought about what could possibly be

I called my friend, the one I trust
She always knows what's best
So she came over and out of her purse
She pulled out "the test"

An hour later, I retrieve
The life changing answer
My friend saw it first, then looked at me
I looked scared back at her

"Oh no..." she said and I knew it all
I knew that I was dead
A million consequental thoughts portrude
The inside of my head

So I thought that life was hard before
But I haven't seen anything yet
I never thought that I'd find out
How angry everyone can get

It seemed the whole world turned on me
With no strength to fight back
I felt so dirty and impure
And with consequences I did not lack

I hope it teaches a lesson
It'll at least be one good thing
"With great power comes great responsibility"
And responsibility it sure does bring

At one time I was innocent
But now look what I've done
Screwed up and made one mistake
And so follows me; a son


Yah, I kno I quoted Spiderman, but it's a good quote and it goes along with the topic. Sorry if it makes it corny but once again, ITS NOT TRUE!!!!
 

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sp182gc   this is kinda untitled   Dec 1 2004, 07:33 PM
ComradeRed   Here's a good follow-up to your poem: Peggy S...   Dec 1 2004, 08:40 PM
xSWEETxCANDiix   hm....a nice poem   Dec 3 2004, 07:55 PM
ComradeRed   Do you like mine?   Dec 3 2004, 08:05 PM
sp182gc   yeah, i do like yours, but i dont think it's a...   Dec 4 2004, 12:26 PM
ComradeRed   Thanks!   Dec 4 2004, 03:33 PM
Frankie   QUOTEI needed him to take my grief Not council me ...   Dec 4 2004, 06:57 PM
sp182gc   thank you!   Dec 4 2004, 09:15 PM
smthngcrprategrl34   awesome job!   Dec 8 2004, 05:01 PM


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