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 Nov 17 2004, 10:12 PM
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 babygrl23  Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911  |
You say,
To smile a little more, So I try, You say, To be myself, So I try, You say, To stay strong, So I try, You say, To ignore all the "idiots" around me, So I try. You say lots of things, And I try and try, So now, I smile more in front of you, Even though it hides the sad little girl behind it. I am myself in front of you, Even though I don't know who I am and everyone hates what I'm becoming. I stay strong in front of you, Even though when I'm alone I cry and cry. I ignore all the "idiots" in front of you, Even though I truly believe they are the brilliant ones and me the dunce. You say to do these things, And I do, But, I'm leaving my life and happiness in your hands that way... Yet...I can't seem to stop. |
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Nov 18 2004, 12:55 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
whoah kinda awkward but its koo
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Nov 18 2004, 07:06 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
I see...thanks
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Nov 19 2004, 01:53 AM
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 hello : ) Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139 |
it is really good i think =)
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Nov 19 2004, 06:44 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
 Thanks!
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Nov 20 2004, 10:45 AM
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 Stay Cheezin Group: Member Posts: 56 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,829 |
Meaningfull, thought provoking, and full of emotions..I understand what your feeling through this poem of being someone that someone tells you to be...Its like being trapped in a body that isn't even yours...Very Good Poem..
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Nov 21 2004, 01:50 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
Thank you! By the way, xcesx, I LOVE your signature pic.
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Dec 8 2004, 05:07 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
that's really good!ive felt that way bfore but not so much nymore. awesome job!
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